by QuickYellowFox
Wow! Fantastic story. You had me on edge for a long while here…..and when Ethan and Jake came, I came with them. You know how hot it would feel to be Ethan in this role. Very nicely written. I hope there are more chapters to come.
Very, very nice job with this one and Bbcluver59 pretty much covered my feelings as well. These guys are definitely too hot together to be just a one-and-done story.
Not only is this story incredibly hot, but also sweet and romantic. I love it! Please more!!!
Sensual. Superb dialogue that built the sexual tension into an inferno of cock lust. Very well written, sexy word pictures of a man not only freely kissing but taking a large cock up his ass and being fucked - even before he even had sucked his lovers dick. A unique story that made me very hard.