by FantasyFisher
Great story and pacing. Could use a bit more first person of what's going on in the sons mind when he is crossing these boundaries. 5 stars
I think this one of the best stories I have read here in a long time. Keep up the good work.
Awesome! Yes, I'm really wanting to get to the "act" but oddly find myself deeply involved in this story. Quite certain many will bash it simply because he hasn't boned her yet.... not to worry, this has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read on here and I've been reading them in this category for years. Keep up the good work, can't wait for ch.6 Excellent writing !!
Wow! What a beautiful story. Love the slow phase and emotions of each character. Thanks for showing the real reluctantness of Julie. Very believable. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Thank you “Fantacy fisher “
A little more information about her real marriage would be interesting. From the earlier chapters their marriage seemed pretty good? What happend for her to fall out of love so quickly? And how is the relationship between father and son? If you think about how both of them reject him so complety, how did that happen?
It seems to me that you are taking a little too long to get mom and son together. I'm sure that will end up as lovers. My question is what is going to happen to the father. Mom seems confused between fucking her son and still wants to be a good wife to her husband.
But let's go back to mom and her son becoming intimate. Man, is that going to open up a can of worms. I can see if mom is divorce or a windowed. There is no other man to have to deal with but her love for her son. But that is not case here so it will be interesting to see mom will work things out.
When I was a freshman in high school, I started a relationship with my older sister. Before undressing her I told her that I was not looking for a one-night stand and if we became lovers, I would not share her with anyone. She also felt the same way, so it was easy to begin the relationship. Not sure if the son will feel the same way. And if he does, man, what next? Mom isn't giving up on her husband. She might have sex with her son, but I think that is where it ends.
Love the suspense
Can’t wait for the inevitable and more importantly direction after!
I hope you plan to write more of this story. It is a good read for the most part. There are a few sentences that need to be reworked. But I like the story so far.
Lol just one point, it’s the Province of Ontario, not the Dominion of Canada that empowers people to officiate at weddings
What an epic story. You are a great Writter. Keep the unwillingness of the mother. Waiting for the next chapter. Thank you for not rushing like many other writers. The building up and emotions are the key
Epic story. Thank you for writing such a great story. Can’t wait to read the next chapter. Please make it as an ongoing series
FYI: Except if/when performed in a specifically non-Provincial context (i.e. in a Territory, the Military/Diplomatic Corps when on foreign soil, and/or in International Waters on a ship registered in Canada, for some examples) Marriage Contracts are managed/governed by the relevant Provincial Law/authorities, not Federal ones!
Furthermore, Canada officially and inherently recognizes valid marriages performed in numerous other jurisdictions, including most of the Commonwealth, and North America, including the United States. In such cases, the prior existence of a valid, active, and recognized Marriage Contract issued by such an authority automatically moots/invalidates any subsequent attempt to enter into a new one in Canada. I know people who got married in places like in the Carribean, who had to go to great lengths to have those foreign marriages broken/annulled before they could re-marry here...
Oh, and, at least in Ontario, passing a blood test to confirm eligibility is a prerequisite for entering into an enforceable (i.e. legally binding) Provincially-recognized marriage contract.
What a perfect piece of writing this is. I wish I could give it 10/10 instead of just 5/5.
Haven't read this much romantic story ever, I once remember reading something of this level a decade earlier and post that this is the first this top notch quality is being written. And that was a published book not a free website. But kudos to you! keep bringing more and sooner.
Please bring the next chapter asap! brilliantly written! this is some high quality stuff my dude.
Beautiful story. It is hard to find best stories like this in literotica in these days. Thank you for taking time to right this. This series is going to be a classic
Wow , love that twist of marriage. Made it extra juicy. Can’t wait for the next part!
I come here everyday hoping to see the next chapter. I hope it’s still in the works. This story and your writing are too good for it to end before consummation.
Hello -‘where is the next chapter?? Let’s go here! You get a great story started and then quit- i don’t think so !!
What the fuck? What's the hold up? Not even the courtesy of informing your fans. That's not a good way to build a loyal following.
Found this story accidentally and finished reading in one stretch. Beautifully written. Live the slow build up. Waiting for the next chapters.
I have found myself waiting with anticipation everyday since chapter 5 released. I keep hoping more chapters will release and we can see where things go. One of the better stories written on this site. The pacing is perfect and I love how you switch between mother and son perspectives
This person has let everyone down- 5 chapters in 2 weeks and now nothing! Like they vanished !
Hey man,ignore all the selfish commenters here. You're writing a great story. Take your time with it. We look forward to it when you comes back.
This has the potential to be one of the best stories on here, please continue it!
Amazing. This is some serious writing. Take your time, keep this level of writing up.
5 stars.
This story would be so much better if wasn’t a lame creep. He has no game, he’s not player with his actions. Constantly sexual harassing her, he a lame. Didn’t check those college buddies of his… what a disappointing protagonist
Awesome series. Can’t wait for chapter 6. Perhaps Cliff needs to be more involved. Dylan should threaten to divorce Julie so that he can have a personal life only to be discouraged by Cliff. Of course Cliff would have to make a few concessions to make this acceptable to Dylan. Just saying…
Really enjoying your writing style. Please keep the hits coming.
I favourited you as an author, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Just don't leave us hanging too long!!
there are 3 possible reasons for no chapter 6
1. writes blo9ck
2. life issues have prevented writing
3. he never intended to go any further
FYI -- despite what at least one person said there is NO blood test you need to do to get married. But any marriages done are only legal if both partners are not already married (and not just in canada). BUT... they do NOT do a search to see if you got married elsewhere (like the US)... so officially Canada would recognize the marriage unless someone challenges it (e.g. in this case mom, son or dad could challenge the marriage and would win).
Well at least they finally kissed. But it took a marriage to get them that far (admittedly they didn't think it was going to count as an actual marriage as it was just some vow ceremony). With only 1 more chapter my hopes aren't great that they'll get down to business, but I've come this far so fingers crossed. Come on give us what we came here for!