All Comments on 'Really Like: A Promise Broken'

by FiveInch033

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AlwaystabooAlwaystabooover 1 year ago
The unencumbered gene.

Nature vs nurture vs events. The dormant taboo gene can be awoken by so many things. Tenderly written by a mother in love.

JobewonJobewonover 1 year ago

I think this could be a really good story line if you continue. Thanks

OverconfidentSarcasmOverconfidentSarcasmover 1 year ago

Damn... That's a Five from me.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wow... this is intense. Can we get a sequel? I'm invested, and I hate mom/ son stories

FiveInch033FiveInch033over 1 year agoAuthor

Thanks for the feedbanck

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Good writing. Interesting story - but left me conflicted. Right? Wrong? I'm not sure I could say.

FiveInch033FiveInch033over 1 year agoAuthor

That's the question.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

WHAT? Where's the rest of the story? Great so she felt she was molested as a child and now she wants her son, so where's the rest of the story. You lust wasted my time!

FiveInch033FiveInch033about 1 year agoAuthor

What did you miss? She had sex with her son and that is why she feels guilty.

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