All Comments on 'Reassessing My Life'

You always find a new slant on the tired old meme. Excellent!

5 stars

Excellent story from start to finish. 5stars

All's well that ends well!

5

Very good. Interesting characters, good well-developed story, hot sex scene for the "climax".

Interesting but a little quick with the ending. Well written

AAAA+++

I am rated this story a 2. I stopped reading after it was said Cass was heavily tattooed. I hate tattoos. Reading a story with a heavily tattooed bitch is the same as reading cuckold loving bastard.

Ok this was great. More a romance with the LW as a setup. Glad you didn't dwell on the court intricacies and showed how he became his own person.

A really great story!

Lovely story.

Another great read.

Well done.

Thanks for sharing your work with us.

I really thought that you would throw us a twist and the ex-wife from your first sentence would end up being Cass playing the long game.

Kinda went nowhere really slowly.

Mercenary or maniac? Either way, Kim’s absolutely relentless. I think I’d have eyes permanently tattooed on the back of my head anticipating her reappearance. That notwithstanding, very sweet and sexy romance for Jase and Cass. Well done. Thanks for sharing your story.

Those tats look amazing when you are in your 20s. They never age well...ever. and it's worse for women because we have more body fat then men and we have babies. Once the art is stretched, it never quite goes back to the way it was I am sad to say

Great story.Thank you very much.

too predictable. once the little sister shows up, you know what's going to happened

Very well done. 5*.

Hot goth chick is clearly the better choice. But I've met guys that preference is the fake blondes, so I guess that's a thing for the right person. Good concept for a story.

Your nom de plume on this site is a lie. This is absolutely the best story that I have read on this site, in this genre. *****

Listen if you're in a relationship with someone and their own family member is warning you about them..... RUN and run fast... that is not normal and should be seen as a huge red flag... he was thinking with his dick and not his head....

This may be your best work.

Wow this was a masterpiece ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Another story that shows your nom de plume is in fact completely wrong.

A nice "loving Wives" story. Plus, thank you for being one of the few that actually understands how Trusts, plus how Trust assets are owned and operate. Also other details, such as it's the clit hood that gets pierced, not the clit itself. Thanks again. Cheers.

I loved it. I loved your MC's take on Cass's body and art. It was a well written story.

call me shallow if you want, but tats and piercings have always been a big turn off for me. So I had to deduct *s for that.

A very nice read. I think I enjoyed the romance angle with Cass more than the LW angle with Kim.

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Left unanswered — maybe because there WAS no answer? — was any real insight into what made Kim tick. NTH is such a good author…maybe a sequel that addresses that question by focusing on Kim’s subsequent journey?

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5 *****

A very nice read. I think I enjoyed the romance angle with Cass more than the LW angle with Kim.

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Left unanswered — maybe because there WAS no answer? — was any real insight into what made Kim tick. NTH is such a good author…maybe a sequel that addresses that question by focusing on Kim’s subsequent journey?

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5 *****

A very nice read. I think I enjoyed the romance angle with Cass more than the LW angle with Kim.

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Left unanswered — maybe because there WAS no answer? — was any real insight into what made Kim tick. NTH is such a good author…maybe a sequel that addresses that question by focusing on Kim’s subsequent journey?

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5 *****

5 stars, but... what's the connection to April Fool's?

Another great story, thanks for writing…….

I don't see the April fools part. So they lied about the engagement and child. So what?

I mean, it's a nice enough story and all...

But, to be honest, it probably could have been better without the 'dude dumped his cheating wife for her unconventional sister' trope.

Not that it makes the story worth per say; it just makes it... boring? Predictable? Have your pick.

Still easily the best story of the day. So I thank the author for the share.

Very good, liked it, and the male MC wasn’t a total wimp.

I put tales/stories into three categories: "Burn The Bitch or Bastard" (BTB) or "Reconciliation At All Costs" (RAAC) and Life Well Lived (LWL)

RAAC stories take a beating from those of us who love the BTB. I may not be one of those haters, but I do weigh the stories through my own biases. While I love all of the BTB and most of the RAAC stories on this site.

My favorites are always the Life Well Lived (LWL). This is a label I created because many of the tales/stories have great endings, but they are not RAAC or BTB. They are the ones that the protagonist/offended party live a good life and move forward with their lives. These are the ones that more resemble how the best of real life exists if you want to be happy with who you have become after everything that has happened.

This tale is just another reason NTH is becoming one of the great writers on Literotica.

I have enjoyed the way you bring into your tales a touch of humanity. Sometime that touch is the dark side as you wove into this one with Kim and those who like her are just out for themselves.

But you also brought to light the struggles of being young and trying to find who you are before it’s to late to make adjustments to your current world in order to change your life’s projected future. You show how two different paths of individuals after the left high school moving towards who they are today.

You subtly told of the hard work and effort Cass placed into building her future by taking advanced classes in high school order to finish college early. You let the Cass portion of the tale build in the background of the perceived Goth image, while she became her own person.

You showed the semi passive method which Jason went through becoming who he was after high school into college and up until the changes showed in Kim. His defiance of his father in taking CS instead of Business being part of it. Then learning that he had not grown as much as he needed in order to be a truly happy person with who he had become. This realization sparked the changes to his future path in life.

The method which you weaved all of these things together are the reason I believe you are one of the great writers on this site. Your tale earned the Outstanding Read ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ I gave it.

Keep Writing

JH4Fun

Good story.

Some real life introspection at the end.

I immigrated 5 years ago, redundancy was the catalyst, but other events paved the way. A disastrous common law marriage with a court that reamed my arse, my family taking her side, so I moved across country to isolate myself from them, a good marriage that died a slow painful death, and then the redundancy allowed me to simply walk away from a life and country I no longer wanted to be in.

I wasn't blameless, I'm strongly independent and know I'm not the easiest person to live with. But I'm now married to an amazingly traditional women who I understand wants to do things for me because it's a way to show her love for me. I wasn't ready or able to understand that when I was younger.

I don't concern myself with my wasted past, I simply look forward to a great future, with a wonderful woman.

Not my cup of tea but a good story. I have disliked frats and I hate tattoos. They are a complete turnoff.

Well written, a pleasure to read. Enjoyed your story. 5 *****

Well written, a pleasure to read. Enjoyed your story. 5 *****

Daaamn, you are an amazing writer. You somehow find new niches and emotion in one of the most challenging genres on this site, and with actually humanity even when you’re being harsh. Thanks.

One of the most talented writers on Lit. You need a more descriptive username! 😁

(Hope this didn't duplicate, Lit went into a tizzy when I tried to post it)

This would have been better received in the romance category. It was obvious from the moment I read the sisters name where the story would end. Not a bad, attempt, just not very interesting.

This was really good. Deserving of 5 stars. the only thing i would have liked to see added would be what happened to kim and her life after that. good or bad would like to see the trainwreck that she became.

"That was sort of accurate. Kim wasn't a physical threat to me" - That may be, but how many times to we see the husbands get hit with ROs just because?

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By dragging things out, Kim is keeping him and Cassidy close to each other.

Bravo!

Jason nailed it talking to Cass after their first time. You can't truly be happy in a relationship and make another person happy if you don't know yourself and what you really want out of life.

Where was the joke?

Whew! Damn great story. Like the way it flowed through to a good ending. Thanks.

good piece of literature

though quite mild in temperament compared to the writer's other stories

even tho I skipped the sex part of Cass and Jason

not a fan of tattoos again this was good

As usual for this writer, well written and entertaining, but it's hard to overcome personal animus towards abusing and violating women's bodies. Some will say that no, it's redecorating, but in reality 'ink and metal' just shows how insecure someone is with their body as God gave it to them. Yes, I'm old fashioned, I much prefer plain, natural women to any goth or porn star look. But, still a good story.

Damn. You knocked it out of the park with this one. Definitely a 5

A great love story, but not as unusual as most of NTH’s stories. The story was well written, but that’s just what we’d expect from NTH.

You write solid characters and a good plot, but Cass was too extreme for me. A woman covered in tats, pierced and shaved is about a two on a ten scale. I'm kind though, no rating at all.

Always liked your work, but page 2 is a blank sheet.

excellent

Your work on this site certainly shows an impressively wide range. I'm glad your stuff mostly shows up in LW because that's kinda the heart of the site, but you've shown us a bit of many styles. This one is essentially a romance. Some of your earlier stories seemed like almost horror. I like the middle of the road stuff the best, but it's all great work, and I hope you keep at it for a long time to come.

I liked this. Our MC matured as the story continued. D

Beautiful.

Simon_Masters

A very nice read. I think I enjoyed the romance angle with Cass more than the LW angle with Kim.

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Left unanswered — maybe because there WAS no answer? — was any real insight into what made Kim tick. NTH is such a good author…maybe a sequel that addresses that question by focusing on Kim’s subsequent journey?

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5 *****

Love It. 5 Stars

FTDS

Guy got himself a goth gf - winning

Nice, very nice characters. 'Cept for Kim. Maybe over time, some real-life Kims get to be better people.

Another amazing story. Thank you! 5 stars.

Wonderful story. Cass said Jason was hung like a horse, but he still wasn't enough for Kim. I wonderful if her tits grew and did she remove her nipple rings to feed her babies and husband...

I do enjoy a story which is different. With Cass being a heavily tattooed lady it had an interesting spin to it. Thanks for sharing. *****.

I do not like tattoos but I like this story

Well done. I enjoyed the read i like the way the story came together.

The Hack strikes again. Near perfection. Only missing a relating of the disaster that Kim's life became.

Really nice, erotic story. Often, people marry what they want, but not what they need. Thanks for the story.

Well crafted. Purely fiction, still, I find sorrow when people fu(k up their lives like his ex.

I truly enjoyed the story. It had depth to it. 5 stars.

Excellent Author.... Please write more about it for us..!!

Wonderful writing once again. Realistic dialogue and emotions. However, Kim and Jase’s separation and eventual divorce was sad, because Kim DID love him, and realized her fatal mistake, just as Jase realized that he really hadn’t loved her as he should have. Four stars ⭐️ for this one.

Thank you for a very well written story, it was enjoyable to read.

You have the wrong name for a FACT!

4 stars - an OK BTB

"Yeah. Sorry, sis, but he's my meal ticket now."

Actually made me laugh. I like this chick.

Strong dialog and didn't follow the tired formula for the category where it's showed how much ex's wife has fallen apart or finally becomes remorseful. Which makes sense since this isn't the ex's story. No obligatory epilogue which also makes sense since you tied everything up everything important as you would expect from any other short story. Reading this story I had a feeling that something was off. That it lacked something and something was wrong because of it. And I realized that the story wasn't checking off all the boxes that had to be checked for stories in this category. Things like the epilogue and ex's downfall. Made me remember how samey many of the stories on this site are. It's clear this category serves to empower some writers who've gone through a bad breakup. The formula I mentioned turns the stories into some sort of madlib type of affair. You kinda know what's going to happen already and what sets stories apart are how they're able to subvert the readers expectations. But I mean this is actually a legit story. If you removed the sex I could actually see this in some sort of short story collection. Because of that I didn't care that you didn't do something like pour molten lead on the wife. Nailed whatever needed to be nailed to put the reader in the main characters head because I really don't care what happened to the ex and am content with the ending which says a lot given it was posted here where the readers cry for the cheaters blood.

Hey, I'm not a writer at all and not trying to talk out my ass that's just how I see it. Actual writers will probably find reason to disagree. And looking back at your bio and seeing how you only started not too long ago it's clear that you're taking real writers suggestions into consideration.

Looking back at your other stories I saw a few titles that I distinctly remember and felt were quite good. I know I said I'm not a writer but I feel that this advice applies to anything you're trying to get good at. If you want to grow I highly recommend not only writing here. Or basically not just erotica. Find a venue where your stories aren't consistently at a higher quality than the others submitted. Find a place where your stories get ripped the fuck apart and you want to quit. Then write another story for here to feel better. Go back and read the constructive criticism on the other site. Apply it to the next story on that site that ripped you apart. Repeat. Also try writing about things you know nothing about and need to research to find out. Stuff totally out of your element. Also try your hand at longer stories. Find more contests to submit stories to.

It's like the saying goes, if you're the smartest person in the room then you're in the wrong room. And dude you did like 20 something stories in just 5 months and almost all of them are in the mid 4's. And you say you only started like 5 months ago. You need more of a challenge otherwise you're going to stagnate or get bored. You'll get awesome at writing a pretty specific topic for a specific audience starting from a place where you're already quite good from my perspective as a reader. Like I said I don't write and likely talking out my ass but unless you're lying you began less than half a year ago and constantly rolling 19's and 20's. Not saying quit here, I like your stories. Just need to be pushed some more.

And this is a little bit related to my biggest criticism of the story. The story was really good. I liked the dialog. But there's something missing. I remember short stories from 20 years ago. I'm already forgetting this story. There's a nugget that could have had me remembering this story years from now, that whole thing about how he shouldn't have been with her. That he didn't really love her and how because of that the betrayal didn't have an effect on him emotionally. That's the thing that would keep people thinking long after they're done reading. It needed to be expanded upon. You want to get the reader to wonder if there's anyone in their own lives like that. This criticism is related to me telling you to find more challenge because this isn't something most readers will tell you here. Yes you'll get a few but also a tidal wave of posts being called a cuck because the reader hardly even bothered to read and thought the guy got back with his wife. The more challenging route would have other others agreeing with me. Or more likely that I'm wrong and why I'm wrong which is important especially if you originally agreed with me.

Well shit yeah probably talking out my ass tho. Damnit I came here to find something to fap to and ended up feeling like I just did homework writing this post.

Top notch stuff.

Wow this was REALLY REALLY good. Thank you!

Beautiful story. It starts out in a rather typical theme, but the finish is wonderful and powerful.

A good BTB, but a bit confusing. I'll try other NOTALENTHACK stories now, but no promises.

Said it before your NOT a notalenthack.

I loved it. It's not the first story I've read where the MC ends up with the younger sister, but I liked that Cass was there for him. It helped him get over Kim, and allow him to find himself.

I gave 5 full stars.

Dude. The sister? Really?

A head shaking 3 stars.

Enjoyed the story. Thought the last half finished it off rather well. Jason was a lucky guy. Thanks for your writing.

Another 5 star offering from the very talented, NTH!

Impressed by your literary skills

Sorry, I didn't care for this one. Didn't care for any of the characters or their motivations. Saw the thing with the sister coming from the introduction of her character. As a story, this is one of your more feeble attempts. You have written some good stories in the past, this just wasn't one of them.

Wanderer.

A good effort, but an impossible challenge: Nothing a tattoo master can create adds anything of significance to the simple yet infinite beauty of a whole unspoiled woman. You add a plethora of spices to food because your senses and maturity are inadequate to discern and appreciate the actual taste. You might as well claim that the faces carved into Mt. Rushmore improved the beauty of the mountain. Which is fine. Madonna and Michael Jackson not doubt think/thought their cosmetic surgeries are an improvement on God's natural gifts. Embarrassing.

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And despite a decent effort to explain the MC being a deaf dumb and blind poltroon, it really didn't take much for the monster within Kim to reveal herself once directly confronted. Hope Cassandra can inspire the production of some testosterone into what she apparently thinks is a Man's Cock. Kim apparently was pretty good at appearances too. So much for first impressions.

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So while the plot was good, the thoughts and actions were underwhelming, even a bit juvenile. And maybe just a little bit naive? I noticed it is never mentioned that the husband got any ink on his skin. Guess its hard to improve on perfection? A miss. But thanks for the effort.

Okay story. I could never figure out why people tattoo their bodies. To me it is a real turnoff. It’s a permanent display that is very hard to get rid of. You are disfiguring you body. Plus as you get older you wrinkle it looks sick. Why do people do that to themself’s.

Another fantastic story. Made me forget I was reading an April Fools entry.

This had more head eases than A canibell s show&tell at school!! 5 stars

Da zz y D,

Tried & true LW - outstandingly done. I like the MC realization that he never should have married her. How he realized he had to grow to be happy. Always love it when a new stories list has one of yours.

You're good, very good. 5 Stars of course.

You've done better. This was a painful read with a lot of unnecessary fillers.

I enjoyed a well written story, although the ending was a little abrupt.

Great talented story!!!! Congratulations!! 5 stars from here!

Wow you can write really well !

Another great story

A good, but not great, tale. This is an example of an author that has penned some great stories, and this one doesn't quite live up to it. I enjoyed it and was entertained, just felt it was a little boilerplate. I anxiously await the next NTH story.

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