All Comments on 'Rebecca'

Did you write this while you were on the shitter? Was there a deadline you were near to missing, and couldn't check it? No one to proof it?

So many errors it was very distracting.

Comment noted thanks. Easy to spot the errors reading back. Not so easy when you're proofing yourself though. First story published so all a learning curve.

Fairly interesting story! You do need to find a good proofreader, though.

I enjoyed it quite a bit. The back and forth between the two characters awkwardly interacting while having their own motives to kill each other was written nicely. Wouldn't mind seeing more of "Rebecca." I'm sure there are ways to keep her interesting despite us knowing her true nature. Looking forward to seeing more. Cheers.