by abiguy
belongs in the nonerotic area not a bit of incest or taboo and way to short. use the proper catagories from now on or don't post at all.
I think the author is trying to set the stage here. Allready a few things hinted at. My curiosity is piqued. What's next?
Need alot more discription. Like what did rebeccas pussy look like... how big was Alana cock...di Alan and his friend ere fuck or suck or just blow. Other than describing it was good write more
As a reader so eloquently told me I screwed up and did not mark this as chapter 1 of hopefully many. If this can be changed I will do so immediately.
Thank you all for the kind words so far and I hope to have another chapter up shortly.