All Comments on 'Rebecca and Alex's Weekend Away'

nicely written, good flow.

you might want to look at character development and the climax could have built a little longer with Rebecca's teasing "what do you want?" "what will you give for it?"

great first entry. keep up the good work.

Nice buildup and carry through with the lust, seduction, and passion. It's always fun to read about the crush and attraction between two women that lead to the courage to make the move. Personally don't care for toys and piercings as they seem to make it less intimate and personal and more about just having sex. That's just one opinion though - I think you should keep it up - you definitely have potential.

FUCK!!! Can I join next time! I'm a horny as hell girl now!! I'm so jealous.. I wanna lick ur pussy and u can have mine baby;)

that was brilliant made me cum, so wanted to join in!!