by UltimateSin
I have read a lot of stories on here this I the first one I feel I had to commit on. This is possibly the most touching heart reaching beautiful story I have ever read on here. Thank you for sharing this
5 stars. NO--WAIT. Make it 10 stars. Whew. Heck of a story. One of the best I have read, anywhere. May you keep writing forever. Thank you.
I can't give you more than all the stars in the universe. I am still crying as I write this. This story for me was emotionally over the top. And I have to say this is, for me, the number one love story that I have read on Literotica. Thank you. You are a wonderful author.
A wonderful love story of real love. Only thing that could make it any better would be if it actually happened as you have written it.
A long slow steady read. Not to be rushed and worth every minute of took to get to a glorious ending. A true love story. Well done.
I loved this story of real love, I wonder if it is possible for a family history of this sort to be carried over to another generation and whether there would be any health issues with having second generation incestuous children. If anyone could write that story, you could. 5 stars for this one anyway.
Loved every word of this story. Great romance and affections! A classic. Thanks so much for this wonderful story.
Absolutely amazing story!!!!
I like how the story revolves around the love they all have for each other, and the sex is just an extension of that love.
You took something that was taboo, and potentially dark, and put out an incredibly beautiful story of love that transcends all barriers (not to mention incredibly hot!)
Great writing UltimateSin
While not saying I approve of incest by parents, this was a most soothing and loving example of what could be. Nicely written.
I appreciate your sharing the story, just wasn't for me. For instance...when you take two virgins for the first time that have been using dildos you can skip the 'I don't want to hurt you so I will go slow'
It had already been a slow read but when I got to that part I skipped to 10 and read the epilogue.
First I want to say thanks for giving us readers a heads up on what's inside the tale. Really appreciated.
Fantastic back story for the father but virtually no explanation of the relationship between the daughters and father. The dialog made the girls seem more sexual and less loving than perhaps was intended.
Thanks for sharing this tale.
Phenomenal story, my one complaint would be that you need to cut down how many times you had people remind us that Carolina looks like her mother, you said it close to every time she was in the scene and it got exhausting to read
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An EXCELLENT story all around!
The right amount of sorrow, joy, love, commitment, and (did I say love already?) LOVE.
11/10!!!!!
Good, but not great for me. The setup was amazing and heart wrenching. But, the fact that Cassandra especially, but also many of the girls seemed to be as obsessed with their sisters as their daddy made it feel somewhat lesser. It diminished the relationship between Mark and the girls.
5/5 Excellent story, What a rollercoaster of emotions. This had my eyes wet so many times. I only wish I had the love and adoration expressed in this story.
You have a great talent for crafting incest stories.
I enjoy your stories a great deal, as they tend to hit all the notes that I enjoy. You craft terrific stories, stories with compelling plots. Thank you. Please continue.
I don’t think any other writer gives me whiplash as much as you do, some times you’re writing does not bother and then I read this one and I can’t even get past page 3 ( it’s especially weird with this one because I really enjoyed Zana and they don’t seem that different writing wise)