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So... as always when writing stories, this one was a bit of an experiment, trying to push the boundaries on what I would normally write (also cake).

Any thoughts/feedback appreciated.

But in the wrong category.

Believe it or not, but some of us do care about the backstory.

Interesting take. I liked it. Don't know if it's in the right category, but close. Too bad there isn't a subcategory called "Erotic coupling/faux incest role play". That would be a great place for this tale.

Good job! And sexy as hell.

Apparently the writing skills were taken too.

Welp... this thing now has the dubious honour of being my most read, most favourited, and lowest rated story. So... that's weird.

@Anon and @JaceyTrey

I agree on the categories thing. Did not actually request this category, but mods put it here anyway. A bit tricky to pick catagory, in that people in Incest/taboo category probably want real incest/taboo, not role play, while people who steer clear of this category probably don't even want role play of it... so... *shrug*. Will probably stick more clearly to Erotic couplings in future. Stories tend to be happier there.

@TheSexualDeviance

Agreed- I've done a bunch of other stories that set up backstory more heavily. Normally that's what I lean in on; but this time I tried to do something with more of a "blank slate" narrator- seeing if that let people project more onto the character (either projecting themselves, or whoever takes their fancy). Not convinced it worked, but wanted to try it out as an experiment.

Loved it! Thanks for sharing