by pupwos
Unlike our 'Anonymous' friend (I love how courageous, anonymous trollers/critics like to stay hidden behind a wall of anonymity), below, I found this story enjoyable to read. It is certainly SciFi but also had elements of romance and first-time erotica.
I found this story well-crafted and well-written with very few -- if any -- typos.
Keep up the good work and remember that no-one builds monuments to critics.
I liked the buildup and the magical changes and the ending. Kudos for the prologue, it helped wind the story down and give the reader a sense of finality.
Thank you.
This was a very well written story. There was a little confusion for me as to why Casey just went with what was happening...even as much fun as it might be to find out what sex as a woman feels like, I would lose my mind if something like that happened to me.
Started reading just to pass the time... then really fell into the story. Doesn’t read like an amateur story!! Beautifuly well written!
I really liked this story, I had a lot of fun reading the story. It was truely well written and it was really enjoyable. Please keep writing, you are really good.
I really did enjoy the story . I so wish I had had this option . It would have been so good to keep my leg ahh well .
I really liked the way you built the story up , well written . Had good pace and a really good ending .
This was a really well written story, excellently paced with great character development and just the right level of erotica. It's a shame you have not posted more, I would love to see more stories from you.
Thanks for your kind words @taust (and others)! I have other abandoned drafts, but nothing that came to me the way this one did – and my need for an outlet reduced when, a few months after writing this story, I finally accepted that I was actually trans. (Who could have possibly guessed from a story like this one?) Maybe I’ll write more at some point, though.
Where can find the full story of "secrets of the strongman" by Nancy Rose, this story is very hot i like it