by shadowblaze18
Wow brilliant. i wanna definitely know the next time you are planning another one of Rd Carpet Facials. If you need suggesations just ask x x
I'm very impressed by this story and can't wait to see you roll out the red carpet for another lucky starlet. Keep up the good work!
Good story, good detail, etc. But the whole concept of her doing it voluntarily made it a little weak. She should have been blackmailed or something, making her an unwilling participant at first. Then her transformation into uninhibited cum-slut at the end would have been a lot more interesting.
Hot concept, though. Who's up next for this treatment? More celebs, please!
Excellent work...hope to see more soon....do you perchance take requests? (grin)
The action and the imagery was excellent, definitely very hot; but there needed to be more explanation of why Lindsay agreed to something like this. Some of the time spent explaining Julius's motives should be used to explain Linday's motivations. Also, you could probably stand to proofread it a couple of times--nothing really takes away from the story, but there's just a few typos and missing/wrong words. Still, definitely continue the series.
This story was great you should write some more soon and put like mandy mooore in it. That would be great
i loved this story enough to post this and i never post a response can't wait to read more of these stories. Keep'em commin!
>:P
Brilliant just because it was Lindsay. Although it did need some explanation why and i also gotta say that i felt kinda bad for her while getting so turned on. It was great though. keep up the good work
ou face-fucking pervert. I love you. The story was awesome and I truly hope to see a continuation of the series.
you should write more soon it has been like a year and a half
this was probably the best story i have read on literotica. I love the fact you made a story about the hot lindsey getting fucked and humiliating her. Who wouldnt want to fuck then humiliate her?
keep it up man
Your story about LiLo reads as a very credible. And you did it using only 2 pages. Cool!
How about writing a story for Stacy Keibler? She really needs an excellent audition in order to get back into the public eye.
I like the way your (twisted) mind works. However, I feel the need to concur with those who ask for more psychological development in the characters.
A VERY ELITE can get by without *some* reference to motivation in their key characters. And those breathing that rareified air already have devoted followings.
This is a great story! I love it. Would you make a Red Carpet Facials: Episode for Keiko Kitagawa, please?
Pretty please?
White cherry on top?
Thank you.
Max