All Comments on 'Red Carpet Facials: Episode 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
good!

Thanks! Good story! I really hope to read the next episode!

faye1203faye1203over 19 years ago
Ubelievable

Wow brilliant. i wanna definitely know the next time you are planning another one of Rd Carpet Facials. If you need suggesations just ask x x

Sean RenaudSean Renaudover 19 years ago
Roll out the carpet for the new guy!

I'm very impressed by this story and can't wait to see you roll out the red carpet for another lucky starlet. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
`I like it!!

hey Could you do Ran symone next? great read111

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Was missing something

Good story, good detail, etc. But the whole concept of her doing it voluntarily made it a little weak. She should have been blackmailed or something, making her an unwilling participant at first. Then her transformation into uninhibited cum-slut at the end would have been a lot more interesting.

Hot concept, though. Who's up next for this treatment? More celebs, please!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
!!!

Excellent work...hope to see more soon....do you perchance take requests? (grin)

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Very good, but I agree w/ "Was missing something"

The action and the imagery was excellent, definitely very hot; but there needed to be more explanation of why Lindsay agreed to something like this. Some of the time spent explaining Julius's motives should be used to explain Linday's motivations. Also, you could probably stand to proofread it a couple of times--nothing really takes away from the story, but there's just a few typos and missing/wrong words. Still, definitely continue the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Great, Write Some more

This story was great you should write some more soon and put like mandy mooore in it. That would be great

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Amazing

i loved this story enough to post this and i never post a response can't wait to read more of these stories. Keep'em commin!

>:P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Great

Brilliant just because it was Lindsay. Although it did need some explanation why and i also gotta say that i felt kinda bad for her while getting so turned on. It was great though. keep up the good work

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Wow

ou face-fucking pervert. I love you. The story was awesome and I truly hope to see a continuation of the series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
write some more

you should write more soon it has been like a year and a half

AnonymousAnonymousabout 18 years ago
HOLY SHIT

this was probably the best story i have read on literotica. I love the fact you made a story about the hot lindsey getting fucked and humiliating her. Who wouldnt want to fuck then humiliate her?

keep it up man

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
Loved it !!!!!!

should do Amanda Bynes next

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
W-whoa...

If you do take requests, do Lacey Chabert next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
VERY HOT STORY!!!

Your story about LiLo reads as a very credible. And you did it using only 2 pages. Cool!

How about writing a story for Stacy Keibler? She really needs an excellent audition in order to get back into the public eye.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
one more time!

natalie portman, please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Tentative Kudos

I like the way your (twisted) mind works. However, I feel the need to concur with those who ask for more psychological development in the characters.

A VERY ELITE can get by without *some* reference to motivation in their key characters. And those breathing that rareified air already have devoted followings.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Good stuff

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Story!

This is a great story! I love it. Would you make a Red Carpet Facials: Episode for Keiko Kitagawa, please?

Pretty please?

White cherry on top?

Thank you.

Max

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