All Comments on 'Red heels'

Liked the twist at the end. Good humour. Good story

Seductive in a special way only evident to those accustomed to a bilingual Spanish tongue.

Nicely written erotic story. Despite the early action it is not hurried. Well done

Cheating husband, that's all.

No wife in the story.

Quite well done for a first effort with an ending twist for good measure.

Word and thought flow was only flawed by a few word choices and some heavy crudeness at times. All in all a good first story.

Loved the story loved the pucture of you too. Would love to see you with those red shores on, just the shoes on nothing else.

You've written a neat sexy story and included a nice twisty ending. Congratulations.

The next chapter, where the wife figures ut what's going on and takes his ass to the cleaners should be even better. She'll fuck him good, I betcha!!

nice first time story,wicked ending next story just go to your next trick.Revise your picture lets just see your feet in those lovely high heels.(no platforms)

I'd love to see your hot sexy feet in those shoes. Please show.

is one hell of a chore. TK U MLJ LV NV

Only wife (incidental, at very end of story) is coming home from the graveyard shift in hospital! NOT LW. Erotic Coupling. NOT Romance!

Nice pic!

Cheating whore, his wife is going to cut your heart out.

Interesting, fun read, second entry.

LOVE slap-hapy-papy #9