All Comments on 'Red Notice Ch. 01'

So far, very good. Keep going please

A fun and promising start. I Iook forward to reading further instalments.

Very good start - I look forward to the next chapters - thanks!

Interesting so far. Look forward to more chapters. Good storyline with interesting characters. Cheers

Promissing, hope to read more

An interesting story with a good flow to your writing, 5*

OmGOSHES lovely! *****

Who will spank the spanker? 5

Na prost, das fängt ja gut an!?!?!

Ich wurde als schmerzgeile Sub richtig kribbelig und feucht beim lesen.

Da ich aber auch switcher bin, macht mich die Geschichte richtig an und ich bin gespannt wie eine Bogensehne vor dem Abschuss der Pfeils, auf das nächste Kapitel.

Ueli, Saoirse (Sör-scha) und Mia

A great first chapter. This story has a truly original idea, a sub (well Kelly is certainly not a Dom!) who has to come to terms with being a strict spanker!

So many possibilities!

And Nadine, who is so much a Dom, she just has to end up smacking Kelly's naughty bottom.

A great start.

A very nice story, so far but the title is deceiving.

You write with an underlying humor which is captivating. People rarely are what they think they are and often limit themselves unnecessarily. You’re expressing truths here, awesome.