All Comments on 'Red Polka Dots'

loved your story, well written, consistent and erotic. Everything a story should be.

There were a few too many side stories before getting to the big party. It was a bit distracting. Not that the side stories were bad in themselves, they just weren't necessary.

I was a bit dissapointed in this story. All the others (of Paul's) I have read have been much better, I think maybe there's too much action early on making the the climax of the story a little uninspiring.