All Comments on 'Red Squad Ch. 02'
by WifeWatchman
- 12 Comments
tazz317almost 4 years agoa very thorough clean department is a must to hold the loyalty. TK U MLJ LV NV
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoWell WW, you seem to be doing your best at the suspense you are creating in this story. You have mentioned Carole several times, so that obviously has some connection to the ending. Now on to the confrontation at the police building with the so-called security. Why does a councilwoman need a security detail when you have never mentioned that no other assembly person has such a detail?
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoI predict the assemblywoman and her goons are going to be treated to a tour of the inside of the departments interrogation rooms.
acupalmost 4 years agoYou have crafted the cliff hanger to an art form... ARGH !!!!!
WifeWatchmanalmost 4 years agoAuthorThe next chapter has been submitted, and hopefully will be published soon.
Anon/400 years ago - I'm always mentioning Carole; The Greatness is evolving, dontcha know. Also, the Assemblywoman's security will be discussed in upcoming chapters, so hang on for that.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoFeds pulling in a police station is one thing. Private security is a Whole nother level of Stupid.
Anonymousalmost 4 years agoNow that todd has non-functioning balls, would love to see don give theresa a child - they already have the closest relationship out of all the characters....plus it would be hot. And don and cindy need to get together at some point....please....maybe with priya as intermediary.
WifeWatchmanalmost 4 years agoAuthorTeresa can't have children; she had her uterus removed in 'Teresa's Christmas Ordeal'...
Beyond that, don't count on Don having sex with Teresa or with Cindy. If and when I do write more sex scenes, I've got too many other good couplings going on...
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