All Comments on 'Red-Thong Girl In the Elevator 02'

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ElectricBlue almost 2 years ago

Not quite sure about the intent behind this, but I far preferred your first version. Can't pin down why, but the first version had a zing, whereas this one falls flat for me. I scored the first (a five), but didn't score this one.

sirhugs almost 2 years ago

I think Gramps got into my whiskey, the frisky devil. more power to him.

oldmanbill69 almost 2 years ago

Cute.

Paul4play almost 2 years ago

Fun little tale with a playful twist!

Anonymousalmost 2 years ago

Its like that story of the old rich billionaire who married this hot young thing that was pure sex on a stick. Everyone warned him she was just marrying him for his money. The old geezer said: "Oh I know she married me for my money but I plan on having a hell of a great time while she tries to find my money".

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I followed the 'orphan to soldier' path that many others have. Found myself embroiled in the Vietnam mess - on the wrong side of the POW trauma. I lost some fingers and damaged a hand over there. Coming home to an unwelcoming nation, I stayed low and out of sight - still avoid...

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