All Comments on 'Redefining Punishment... Again'

by Smokey125

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Cindy1001Cindy1001over 9 years ago
Surprising twist

I love this story - and the preceding one - very much. It touches a heartfelt desire, sisterhood in spiritual bondage. But it is also beautifully written and plotted.

stroudlestroudleover 5 years ago
Sexy twist

Oh those baths sound just lovely. Cathryn sounds the perfect playmate for Delilah whilst Mommy is out. Lucky girls.

You had me fooled there with the plot twist for a minute Smokey. Heee heee, nicely done.

Nice to see Mistress Helen /Mommy more caring side.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
😈 Wow!... That Is Awesome,,, Yes!

Hallo Smokey!

This one is just simply brilliant, and as always it's very well written, hot and sexy... with an awesome mean little twesst to it 😲 ,,, yes!

Thank-you... Another 5-Stars and 5-More Hot Wet Orgasms!

Your kinky dyke friend,

Gay Kat..

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Shades of "Fanny Hill"! A delightful meeting of the 18th century (I think) with the 21st. Very well done, indeed!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

An exercise in f-ery. Erotica for old couples sleeping in separate beds. With a little more payoff than being friend-zoned. With a rich helping of, very nearly pointless, visceral heart-break.... Can, meet Should.

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