by Red_High_Heels
I think you are wrong in your bio. You certainly are a writer. Well done, and very hot.
It was headed for a score of 4 until the end. You just had to fuck it up. Instead I'm forced to give your first attempt a 2.
I had to think long and hard about the 5* I gave this story. Should it have been in the LW category? Well, whatever catagory, it was hot. If this is your first story, I can't wait for more.
THANK YOU for such a fun read!!!! You have a fine eye for sufficient detail without becoming repetitious.
Please do continue as you will.
Be Well and Happy,
Paul
I do love reading about hardcore fucking from a woman’s point of view.
Overall good story, I would have like a more descriptive tit play… perhaps Ruthie having his cock between her tits while she pushes them together while rolling her excited nipples in her fingers.
Excellent, excellent, excellent loved it. So descriptive and spot on. The last line about the train was where you lost me. Could have done without that. But excellent