All Comments on 'Redhorn'

Good to see another story by you. I like the premise. I think there's a little too much exposition at the start though. It feels like it's setting up for a longer story, which doesn't match the abruptness of the end. Maybe start with him at the arena and fill in the back story as you go along? Love the concept though - Gladiators! Fuck each other to the death! :)

I really liked this story. It really had a sci-fi vibe to it. Nice strong plot (heavy exposition, sure, but I didn't mind). I just wish there had been more of ashlyn. Great job describing her. The way her skin changes colors during orgasms is great.

Fatality, sex, and sexually powerful women! Great story along the lines of manyeyedhydra! Keep up the good work!

loved it! loved that Ashley won! hehe! :) She was hot...but perhaps his rod could have lengthened and exploded hehe! Remember fatality like in MK where Kitana kissed her defeated foe and the foe screamed as he began streching and expanding then finally exploding hehe! Anyways, I love this story!

After discovering your stories, I fear that no other author of erotic fiction will ever be good enough again.