by RoyceConnors
I wasn't sure if you could pull this off, but I'm getting Sutter-esque undertones from it. I like the way you've introduced the characters and I'm actually watching the show differently now. Some of what you've come up with, makes sense in the show. Good writing, looking forward to more.
I've been catching up on the chapters and it's turning into a great story, Royce. Nothing like I imagined it would be in the beginning, I like the way you've taken it. I like how you emulated KS and followed the way he does sex in SOA. I can almost picture Gemma as Marlene, in the show now that is. Interesting, looking forward to the next one.
Lance