by thezinger
you do not. what a easter egg, now i want more , and i am sure others will as well, nice well written , humorous and engaging story, hope to see more soon about this guy and possibly her
Just like catman71 said ... You have a nice start, you can take in many directions – GO for it
You had me at "Hello"! You have a great talent, hope you continue to write more. Maybe it's because I also had one of those too short love affairs strangled by distance and futility, but it certainly touched something deep within me.
Blake
Look up the definition of "jeopardize". Try not to overuse long words, especially when you are not sure what they mean.