by thezinger
Look up the definition of "jeopardize". Try not to overuse long words, especially when you are not sure what they mean.
You had me at "Hello"! You have a great talent, hope you continue to write more. Maybe it's because I also had one of those too short love affairs strangled by distance and futility, but it certainly touched something deep within me.
Blake
Just like catman71 said ... You have a nice start, you can take in many directions – GO for it
you do not. what a easter egg, now i want more , and i am sure others will as well, nice well written , humorous and engaging story, hope to see more soon about this guy and possibly her