by rwsteward
I liked the story but it was depressing. I was looking forward to a happy ending and I was very surprised when it became apparent that Michael was no longer alive.It goes to show how one decision can affect your entire life.
Michael did the right thing!! Rich bitch whore Kathy is dealing with her comeuppance
Working my way through your catalogue, definitely not my favourite but interesting, 4/5
Very good.5*s. Enjoyed the story but it was depressing A wasted life due to a single choice! Please get your tenses right, skipping from Past to Present and back again, all in the same paragraph!
I think the picture thing at the end was pretty bad and could have been left out. And damn! Just how old was his father and he could walk into the room of his own power!
I really liked the ending, but could have been better over all. 4*.
You write some amazing stories and maybe it's just the ones I've picked so far, but damn they're all tear jerkers.
Read your story, for the third time, and the emotional impact was as just as forceful, as it was the first time I read it.
Too many times, over too many years, I've asked myself the question "What if.........."
No longer.
I will no longer walk away, and have regrets, because I didn't ask what I wanted to ask, when I wanted to ask, of whom I wanted to ask.
No more would have, could have, should have.
Casting off the lines, turning into the wind, dreaming, exploring, daring.
Thank you.
Because it asks a question we all ask ourselves at times: If I could live life over, would I live it the same way or make different choices/decisions? Of course, nobody gets the luxury of going back armed with 20/20 hindsight.
Other than some typos and a few tense issues, a great story well told.
Thank you for a great read. My eyes kept tearing. Must be from the dust in my apartment. Carpe diem!
Wow, you sure know how to draw out emotions. I didn't know where this story was going but it really got there. Thanks for an emotional story.
Just a great piece of writing. Thanks for sharing a very enjoyable story!!
It's not often that I can thank someone for throughly depressing me. Truly a sad story of regrets because the right path was not taken. Given what was presented about Tony what really perplexes me is that she would have ever agreed to marry him in the first place. Major disconnect.
This is one of those stories not to read if you're depressed. It'll push you right over the edge.
regrets come from the choices we make out of fear and that which we give up for comfort. life is a struggle enough with the world we live in and the decisions we make and regret because of a desired outcome thats not what we wanted. but regrets from choices we chose not to take or talked ourselves out of are much greater. it's like leaving the poker table of life with chips in your hand, there not going to do you any good where you're going.
Regrets, we all have them. Love, money. mistakes we made that we thought
were good at the time, we all have them. What if I had not made that bad
money deal , we would be so much better how. nice tale but not for the sex
people.