All Comments on 'Relative Evil Ch. 01'

This was good well written, loved the effort you took to craft the story and not just make it about sex. Very well done. Looking forward to reading the next chapter...

love the back ground and the detail. the story also was really well written, great flow and grammar. look forward to more.

Great story, well written and good character development.

Great background and very believable. You may want to add in some guns though! Or maybe some zombies. Can't wait till the next chapter.

I quite enjoyed this one.

More, More, More, this was not enough go deeper into the story much much deeper not so much for the sex but the story is real and a good one I think with a bit of editing you could futher this story as a real author bravo. :)

Elf the reader

Bravo. I read this for its story not its erotica. Please write more!

will there be more?

Well written, well deveoped characters, believable story. I only wish I understood the title. I didn't see any evil, relative or otherwise, except the incidental rapist. Please continue the plot. You write very well.