All Comments on 'Relative Revelations'

by FamilyGuy1963

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

Started well but fell apart with the dialogue during the confrontation. All pretense of writing characters disappeared, and all that was left was a horny writer who couldn't control himself. A shame.

bshell47bshell47over 3 years ago
What a fantastic Mum.

Sexy and a nymph.

The perfect Mum.

Still want Alexander fucking his sisters.

Can’t wait for the next chapter with his sisters catching them and he is forced to payoff.

AWESOME series.

tangoperutangoperuover 3 years ago
So what happens to dad?

This is the only gripe I have with so many of these stories. A son who loves his dad betrays him without hesitation just for pussy. If at least dad were getting something somewhere or from some other relative -a daughter, his mom, whatever- it wouldn't sound so callous.

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