All Comments on 'Relieving my Mom'

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justwarped2018justwarped2018over 3 years ago

i liked the idea of this story, love to read more

UltimateHomeBodyUltimateHomeBodyover 3 years ago

Not sure why his car having a flat tyre was significant to the story. Seemed a useless detail. Lots of kids get picked up by mum from school every day as normal.

Besides if he is driving his own car he should know how to change to the spare tyre.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Loved this story! Hope you write more!

JamokieJamokie3 months ago

Dear god in heaven yes! Fantastic story.

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