by gostosa73
GAY MALE! How could you possibly post this crap anywhere other than gay male? In the first place, I don't care what he shows you on his phone. Call the police. Secondly, once he sees his wife is cheating with this guy, throw him out. Thirdly, what kind of special moron, upon talking to his cheating slut wife, doesn't throw the guy out or call the cops ESPECIALLY when he finds out who he is and the fact that he's on parole? He couldn't be any dumber if you had inserted a cartoon character in his place. And while I don't usually play the Grammar Police, your writing is horrible. Get an editor, try again or NOT! One of the worst stories in months. Not even HDK will have anything positive or encouraging to say about this mess despite his new leaf.
1 star only because negative stars aren't yet available
Don't make this into another cuckold story where the husband is pathetic loser. The way story headed, you might need to write it in gay category. This story is like every other story dealing with big cocks, can you all come up something original.
The worst thing about Stupid poorly conceived non erotic disgusting story Is that it is a complete and total lie a deceit on the part of the author
Gay sex with strange men has nothing to do with being a cuckold.
It is clear that this new author is seriously mentally ill and is trying to convince people that is disgusting gay rape fantasies are actually Same thing as a loving cheating wife
No redeeming value whatsoever....complete waste of time reading this.
Horrid, but hilarious.
Lue
Ps: Mr Gostosa, as a new contributor, and choosing the Cuck-shit end of the Loving Wives spectrum of stories with such an unusual and comical approach to story-telling, could you perhaps include a few details about yourself in your biography notes?
What a piece of shit.... One of the worst stories ever. Sally has been cucking her wimpy husband for over 3 months and got him to Jack off her lover.... no Fucking way. I would divorce that bitch yesterday, there will be no excuses, just sign the papers. Hated this 1 star bomb.
Did na look like it...please go and get the boo job and sex change that u are so desperate to get..stop wasting our time with this crap
And this is one of the worst I ever read, no surprise in this cuckold story, same wimpy garbage.
In what kind of FUBAR dimension any of what just happened in this pathetic excuse of a story could be the least bit credible?
Lord... you cuck - strike that, CLOSET GAY writers are ready a sad bunch, aren't you?
Anyway, that's I have to say. Going away now.
I really do hope that I am right and the ten other commenters are wrong.
Please, Mr Gostosa, tell us that you are taking the mickey.
Or maybe don't. If you really are, then Ch.02 could be even more hilariously horrid.
Lue
Just another cuck-a-doddle-do story with a whore wife same as all the rest poor
"We haven't been having sex." - Whose fault is that?
I would have called the cops, reported the break-in, Sheesh!
Really bad. No one in their right mind would accept this. Only thing that has any chance of saving this story is for him to grow a backbone and get some revenge. Otherwise I would forget part 2.
.....they just did, terrible, terrible
total garbage, lasted about 500 words then said what am I wasting my precious time for
1* - nothing more needs to be said.
shows how much of a pussy the husband is, So I agree, this sucks even for a cuckold story. Stop while behind.
Maybe as bad as anything I've read in a while on this site. Two disparaging comments from , the ever encouraging, Lue led me to read this. I will never forgive her for that.
I love how all the people who claim they hate cuckold stories just HAVE to read every one
They apologized for giving you access to a computer.
Anony said "Don't make this into another cuckold story where the husband is pathetic loser."
Da fuq? Hes already jacking off his wife's lover, there is no UP form there
Waste of electricity to power the computer. Should be okay males. You might find an audience there.
And when she gets home she will find all her clothes out of the house and on the lawn and will be getting the divorce papers that day on
What part of, "You have to read a story to know what's in it" is too complex for you? If I can know what is in a story without reading it, that means all the crap the story gets is deserved. It means the story is shit.
of steaming crap cuck stories. Why didn't you just search them and find one that suits your fucked up fantasy. I'm sure it exists and is better written than this effort.
From now on Dan doesn‘t want Sally anymore, but prefers her husband’s services.
But there’s a big difference between funny and cringe-worthy. Anyway, the repressed gay cucks will probably love it.
Never, ever, even THINK about writing again. This redefined garbage to a whole new low.
Did you not read the title? Everyone knows that Cuckolds are wimps, closet fags and pussies. What is all your problems with this story? I mean everyone knows that retards have giant cocks and they are so stupid they don't know how to masturbate or something. I do feel dumber for reading this however.
I kept hoping that this story would turn in the right direction and leave the narrator as being less than brain dead. But, alas! twas not to be. Not only is he a hopeless moron but now he's tending toward changing his sexual orientation. What's next, he starts blowing the interloper? Maybe his wife can end her affair when he takes over the ex-con's sexual needs. Then she can find another loser to fuck.
The finer writers can craft a cuckold story that grabs my interest or makes me hot, even though I usually don'r swing that way. But this was not one of those.
R.
Go take a ZyclonB shower. Do it, do it for us, for the rest of the world. Just do it!
Despite the other oddly negative comments I thought this was a good start to what could be a longer term cuckold story. If you don’t like cuckold stories, don’t read them
As you can see from all the angry closet cucks you did a good job
5 stars keep it up
If you don't like other people's comments , just don't read them. Comment on the story and let it go.
To the Anonymice who ask why we read this: We read it because it said "reluctant," so we HOPED there would be some resistance, or SOMETHING.
Why is it that all cucks are incapable of pronouncing the word divorce or the equally difficult word no.
Amused by the comment about wrong category though, perhaps gay male would be more appropriate.
I thought this story was at best Cliche verging on juvenile, there wasn't enough character or plot development to build any tension.
A well written bisexual cuckold story can draw the reader in, you can almost taste the husbands angst, his perception of manhood being torn apart by his desires to submit to his wife's lover.
I suggest you take time to read some of the good stories on this site before you try again
Gay Male would've been more appropriate.
Poor character development and very thin plot, this story's only saving grace was that it was grammatically passable.
I'm surprised you even got any score over one star. This writer must have been released from an insane asylum. Nobody can think up shit like this. Couldn't even make it past two paragraphs. Why is garbage like this even allowed to be posted?
To start, Loving Wives stories ARE ABOUT extramarital affairs. Cuckolding is a part of that. I am a straight male, married for 31 years and have a Cuckold fantasy. My wife knows, thinks it’s fun to play with, but she would never do it. How do I know? She knows I’d say OK.
If you get over the fact that it’s a cuck story, it’s a good story. Perfect, no. Great first try, hell yes. Please keep writing. I would like to see where this goes next. If you didn’t do a good job no one would have bothered to flame you. It is probably their closet gay insecurity what makes the act out.
I have submissive Cuckold fantasies. Ok, I know I will get flamed now and called a fag. No, happily married guy that happens to like reading this kind of story. Was my dick hard while reading it? Yes, of course, that’s why I read them. Did I think it was gay because he jacked her lover off? That’s what some cucks do, here, he was told to do it by his wife who has obviously taken control. If there is a second chapter (I hope there is, this was a good first start for a new author on a Loving Wives story) will he be put in chastity and end up servicing her lover or licking her creampie? Maybe, I hope so, that’s the kind of fantasy that makes the dicks of men with Cuckold
Fantasies hard.
Please write more, ignore the flamers.
OK! 4* .
Good grammar is rare around here. I've taught grammar and writing and my stories are still not perfect. This was pretty decent.
The story itself was, ... well, ... it was kinda fun. No, I'd never want to be in Billy's position, and no I'd never provide such a service, but I caught myself in a chuckle or two.
Go, Gostosa!
YUUCCCKKK!! Wife cheated on him. Wife commanded him to take her lover's dick. What a WIMPPP! Are there real men on cuckold stories?! Apparently not, got even real wimps on the commentary. Well, I won't apologize for being a real man.
Never wrote a comment before! But this one... it's the worst... by far
Ok....Thanks for the painful lesson...."Reluctant Cuckold" means "Cuckold". I despise snuff stories as much as I do these cuck ones. They are equal in repugnance.
What I find amusing is all the negative comments from guys who obviously read it all the way to the end. It seems to be difficult for closet cuck sissyboys to admit their deepest desires.
That was a story for the real idiots on this site! You read bad stories over and over again, but you very rarely read such idiocy. Congratulations!
"I'll see you next Friday. If you give me a good blowjob, I'll give you the best ass-fucking of your life. Sally told me you would really enjoy this."
Huh? The husband gives the jerk a hand job just because his wife tells him to? What kind of chump is that? 2 stars
I can't mark 1* enough for this cuck garbage. this one is over-the-top worse than most of them. Send it right to gay males
What a fucking horrible story, written by a person who hates men I’d venture.
It’s a cuck tale so gets automatic 1/5 for being shit.
My wife found this story and we both enjoyed it tremendously. She likes stories where married women get stray cock, especially big, gigantic cock.
Your story was well-written and a real hoot. The dynamic between the three of them on the phone was fun. It was very hot when Sally told her husband, “"Keep in mind: Dan's a two-hander, honey."
The best part was when Dan’s cum shot off so violently that it knocked over the couple’s wedding picture! Nice symbolism.
Since the hubby had also cum when he jacked off the wife’s lover, we doubt there will be very much marital discord. After all, hubby knew firsthand, exactly what his wife enjoyed about Dan.
This story could go so, so many different ways! We’ll go read your next chapter right now!
Great story!
Dan would get a bullet in the head and Sally would have her shit thrown in the yard, with locks changed, when she got back from her trip. What a whore.
You gays should post your stories in the section for gay stories. We are not interested in stories about gay men like yourself.
I GAVE UP WHEN SHE WANTED HIM TO JACK HER BOYFRIEND OFF!
THIS IS JUST SICK! ALTHOUGH I THINK MAY BE IN THE WRONG CATEGORY...
Incredibly stupid. What kind of a brand could come up with that kind of trash, much less enjoy it. You need to get help.
If this guy is waiting for her when she comes home he doesn't deserve the pussy he used to get. If there we ever a burn the bitch this is it.