by MeredithEighty8
Feelings are complicated but I had trouble with the content of this story. Morgan should have freaked out and cut him out of her life more likely. The ending was not realistic to me.
He did it, anyway. That made it rape, and earned you only ONE star, from me.
You've written MUCH better tales than this one, really. Should have left this one in the circular file!
Like them i've been fucking my sister for two years now, we can't get enough of each other. we have been living as man and wife for nearly a year and i have finally got her pregnant and are looking foreword to becoming parents.
Travis did show some love. The ending was better.
Will you add another chapter?
The whole story is just wrong.
You tried to make it more innocent, but failed completely.
I know most people will agree this is plain sick.
Give Travis a sexy hairy chest. Good that you have made him kinder, softer, gentler with her, and more loving.
All you fuck off.
You clicked on the story of a "reluctant" sister.
Don't like it, don't click on it. Morons.
Story was good and well-written. Don't let the idiots in the comments say otherwise.
There should be a trigger warning. "Reluctant" is an understatement, and the opening paragraph made it sound like it wasn't going to be an outright rape.
To be clear, I'm not objecting about the story depicting rape. I'm objecting to the story having been misleadingly presented. It belongs in the NonCon section, and the tags could be more clear, too.
Saying it's true and pretending it's your actual story just makes it more pathetic. God lord some people need a better hobby!
To Anonymous "Saying it's true . . ."
Take a deep breath and relax! It's just a fictional story.
5 Stars. Wonderful story of a sister finally realizing her brother's true love of her.