All Comments on 'Reluctant Mom Shyla'

I just saw that you have posted a new story . So i thought I should say thank you first.... Now I will read the story... . You are awesome sirajbhai. ...

. . . but the syntax and word patterns are difficult to follow. An English speaking editor would certainly help the flow of the dialogue.

The way you wrote stories are more realistic based on the conversations...

I would love you writings and keep posting frequently stories. You can send second parts of your story "Hanky" including elder son... and the story " lift her sari", etc and many... i am a great fan of all your incest mom son stories ... keep going and increase the frequency ....

big fan of yours however its sad to see you churn out your old stories again and again. master pieces like cooling off saturday exams are my favrts but of late you can see how you have gone down in quality. the low rating is the proof. hope you get back the old magic

Suraj Bhai nai kahani likho . widow mom aur son ki story likho . Include these Slow seduce ,at, first mom not accepting , lifting up her saree ,petticoat , mangalsutr ,sindoor ...

Your got great imagination.

It's obvious that English is not your first language. That's OK but please ask an English speaker to edit your work. It's distracting and bothersome.

GOOD STORIES...

I've read all your stories. Mostly good ones. Deserving 4 stars. A few like EXAMS, HANKIE, STRING OF FLOWERS and GRANDMA'S RITUAL I've given 5 stars.

When each of your stories have 100s of thousands of readership with more than 650 followers, don't worry for negative comments.

Some people are biased. They do write stupid things under 'ANONYMOUS' and intend to escape with murder. They do need to change their IP Address each time they intend to post such comments for a writer of repute who is there with LILEROTICA for more than 1.5 decades with millions of readers and fans.

Keep on writing and keep on entertaining...

Learn to write dialogue that's formatted correctly and readable.

Thank you. Very much in ‘traditional’ style. I enjoy your stories, the conversations between the incestuous couple.

Tis painful obvious it is that English is not your native language. Tis only reason only 4 stars are lit out of 5 possibilities.

However I enjoyed this rather difficult read. Thanks.

John

Siraj bhai when you will write a new story ? Want to see your magic. Wait is too long now . please give another shot