All Comments on 'Reluctant Seduction-Chapter 2'

keep them coming ;)

Getting better, next chapter please

Such detail!!

However, I noticed a slight editing problem.

<br><br><i>Then his member pushed through the hymen that blocked his way. Aria gasped and grabbed firmly onto Eric's shoulders, as he began to glide into her body.

Eric let out a high moan as his shaft became enveloped by Aria's tight virgin hole. Her hymen was still intact and rubbed against him, teasing with every thrust. </i><br><br>

If he pushed through her hymen, how was it still intact a moment later?

Hey everyone, thanks for all the comments, ratings, and encouragement!

As for the last comment about the editing error, your hymen can still stay intact (depending on what kind you have) until your partner pushes himself completely in, causing too much pressure for the membrane. Sorry, had to get that out!

I never expected people to enjoy the story this much, or even expect further chapters, but I'll definitely think about continuing the story line, as my readers wish :) The next chapter may take awhile, as my life is rather hectic right now, and I'm in college, but nonetheless I appreciate the feedback. Thanks everyone!

A great story again. Marvellously full of lust. Love the way she is naked and exposed to him for so long. Great stuff. Thanks for writing.

The world would be a better place if you continued your story.

-Jaz

Please keep writing- you create such incredible imagery and your creativity for a plot line is very promising - whether or not you add to this story or write another.