by CrazyCatGuy
I really enjoyed the characters and dialog. The plot is intriguing and the erotic zmoments seem natural and unforced. Often, stories either end up a long set of sex scenes or those scenes become mechanical and trite. You avoided both. Well done!
OMG, this story needs to keep going. It has so much room to grow. Please don't stop.
This is REAL writing- not just stroke material- not that I have any problem with stroke material, mind you.
Keep it up- I'm adding you to my Favorites right now!
I love it. Please make it a nice long saga. It has such a good story line with lots and lots of potential. Thank You for your talent. SR
I'm eagerly waiting for the next installment - soon, I hope.