All Comments on 'Remembered Acceptance: A Sequel'

Excellent sequel to the other story.

Of all those shit he did, he take her back fucking dumb. 1 star and I'm going to come back here everyday and rate it 1 star so no one will be tempted to read this

Asshole was right. The MC real cuck. 1.

IMO another below par story. Your slowly turning into MM. 2*

Everything was going good untill the END 1 star from me

Sometimes the good guys do win.

This was one of those times.

Again you made a good story great well done

Damn near perfect!!! 5/5! As always!!!

A reconciliation story, but not a RAAC. This story, though, a bit I find my self feeling ambiguous about it. While I do like a good reconciliation story, I also like a good "refuse to reconcile" story. And this felt like one of those, until the end. One can, effectively, argue that "Time does heal all wounds", so the 2 MCs reconnecting is not unreasonable. At the end of the day, a nice story from Saddletramp. Definitely better than ConPulsion's original story.

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Pasqual

Tricking your readers into a RAAC with deliberately misleading tags? Never saw that coming. Far, far from your best effort.

Good job. You turned a turd into something that doesn't stink!

5

It seems you've taken up the mantle for FTDS - that's a high compliment in my humble opinion. An enjoyable epilogue. Thanks much.

A much better ending than the original. Thank you. 5 stars.

Ah, what a shame. You ruined the ending with a reconciliation.

He was rich, good looking, in great shape, and a devoted family man before the divorce. A guy like that would have no trouble at all dating women half his ex-wife's age. Wealthy men don't reconcile with a cheating wife, they upgrade to a hot trophy wife instead.

Saddletramp1956, you are doing a fine job of producing stories with heart and forgiveness for the fallen tart. This one added depth and understanding, a vast improvement on ConPulsion's story which falls short on Literoticas connoisseurs expectations.

Who are you, and what have you done with Mr Tramp?

Expertly written as always, and a positive ending too. It’s more satisfying for some reason when there are some bumps along the way as opposed to a perfect experience every step

Saddletramp wrote a RAAC?

1 star

You're no better than the original.

Knowing the cucky boys will hate this makes it even better. 5* . Well done!

Five asteros Ombre *****

5 stars. Scumbag lawyer deserved more. And Tom suffered for too long, she did also but she earned the punishment. Felt like more penance/punishment was needed for her (short of actually nuking her), but less celibacy and loneliness for him. Maybe slave status? Master/Sub?

Also, would she have told him if he hadn’t caught her?

Hard to believe that both of them abstained for four years. D

Find a counselor dude.

And then it turned inot a romantic reconciliation. Nicely done.

Hang on a sec saddletramp and RAAC, is 2022 going to be one of those crazy mixed up years, is this the year when JPB is going to actually give us a story with an ending, and is soul71 going to write a story where the son says no to his mother’s advances.

We wait with bated breath.

Happy new year to everyone.

He took her back????!!!!!!!

Not like you ST1956!

Oh well, l liked the story

4/5

Mayba with a condom but not bareback and no she doesnt move in. I also would have taken the assholes money. Let the slut use that for her college payment.

Ladtly, guy sounds like a stud. No way he doesnt find a hot widow or someone else as a fwb or long term partner. The ex is not worth it. As he said, she did the last time with no drugs and wanted to add even more men.

WWWWHHHHATTT TTTTHHHEEEE..????z?z?!!!

Is it SaddleTramp story??! Gosh IT IS!

what happened to ST1956?

Lowest I could give 1 star.

Hoped you had a merry xmas.

i know it will always be a special day when I look in my home page here and see a new Saddletramp tale. Only the Saddletramp can properly transform a wimp cuckold story into an instrument of righteous justice in one of his choice add-ons. Remembered Acceptance A Sequel is yet another outstanding example of the Saddletramp brand of total transformation using the parameters of the original story. He takes the wimp's faltering statement at the end of the original story and uses it as a point of total transformation. In one paragraph, said cuckold husband politely kicks his slut wife to the curb and begins the process of recovering his honor and manhood from his slut wife's terminal actions. Then said cuck then walks down the street to the "alpha" male lover and again politely transforms into a human version of an A 10 warthog. First slug is the challenge, second slug is the fight, third slug is the substitution of the incarceration and prison time. He then finalizes his divorce with honor, ensuring that his ex wife still has sufficient funds to finish her degree and engage in a teaching career.

Then we have an unusual and frankly welcome Saddletramp denouement a reconciliation that is PROPERLY done. After four years they reunite at an award ceremony where she receives an outstanding teacher award. They proceed to the final reconciliation for the happy ever after ending. I find it particularly satisfying how Saddletramp paints with watercolors here. In watercolors the most important color is white...which is not a color , but the white canvas that remains untouched. Thus, every stroke must be planned because there is no possible repair of the overall design once an stray stroke paints over the "white.'

Similarly, Saddletramp paints his word pictures throughout the story which frames the reconciliation of the denouement. He frames his words, like watercolor brush strokes, carefully leaving his white space unspoken but implied. Thus the implied white space meaning contains the core of the story. He as carefully framed it: the 4 year hiatus, the wife's decision to successfully pursue a college degree, her years of work to become a master educator, the recognition ceremony that establishes that she has become a paragon, her admission of 4 year celibacy, and her loving submissive response to the ex husband's advances. All of these frame the key problem that caused the whole conflict...she was a self absorbed immature fool who had had everyone do FOR her. Her first real chance to make a decision...and she surrenders to her impulse of the moment rather than stand firm and say no to herself... Saddletramp is telling us that a marriage exists based on mutual trust that builds a safe place called home. Her slut action...her casual betrayal ended that marriage. By choosing to say yes to that obviously destructive momentary impulse she demonstrated that her impulsivity would doom any further attempts to fix that marriage. One cannot trust a spoiled brat to do anything. She must grow...and that kind of transformation only comes through making the correct decisions in painful...suffering circumstances over a long period of suffering. The cumulative impact of this type of behavior is to establish a new bank account of habit...in essence the brain is trained and transformed...new neural pathways are made and strengthened.... That is the ONLY way... and frankly the whole process was documented 20 years ago when a scientific researcher attached a VCR to a MRI to record the transformation of neurons in the brain as the subject learned a task. The resultant movie showed the brain was not static but frankly like a can of worms constantly wiggling around forming new pathways. Those that were used got more resources...and grew stronger and made more connections... ie the new skill was learned and the physical neural pathways became stronger and more pervasive. The more the patient practiced the more dominant that pathway became...overshadowing the previous behavior matrixes which withered and were absorbed, The researcher received a Nobel Prize in Medicine for that work. Nice to know that modern research completely confirmed the old Biblical saw: You reap what you sow...When you sow good things you reap life...when you sow bad things you sow destruction.

Saddletramp here employs this to build his framed ending. They can reconcile because they are two different people. Their decisive actions during that 4 year period have transformed him into a more alpha and decisive person, She has fundamentally transformed through her suffering focus upon setting goals and self sacrifice in every circumstance. They can reconcile because SHE has transformed her core from the impulsive selfish entitled bitch...into a mature woman who puts others first before herself...who carefully considers her path actions based on principle. She can now be trusted....and their love for each other, which never left...can now flower in a new marriage between two equal mature partners.

That's a nutshell... I have read every Saddletramp repeatedly and enjoyed his own journey here as a maturing author. His use of layered levels of meaning here is an illustration of just how great his recent stuff has gotten.

Outstanding....simply Outstanding... Servant takes hold of the chair with the rest of us and lifts Saddletramp aloft as we begin yet another parade of victory around the Olympic oval...5 stars...of course

Loved it as usual ST1956. Thanks for your time finishing this open story. SK742. 5*

Not your best and I do enjoy your writing

God way to start off a new year

I know you like macho aspects in your stories, and this story of course had a major component of machismo, on the part of both men. The characters were quite cartoonish, but you warned us of that in the preamble. To my surprise, I liked the story, despite these aspects of it, and for what it's worth (not much, I'm afraid) you get five stars from me. ~~ JBEdwards

One of, if not the, weakest story you have written. No one, even remotely intelligent, would have further contact with a woman who behaved like she did.

Villain went with handshake! Get real!

Cut back on workouts and is in better shape?!

As always, the tramp delivers.

5* because it's still christmas time and I like happy endings.

You seem to make every story that you add another ending so much better. I try to find all of your writings and have read most of your other stories. Keep up the good writing, someday you may actually get paid to do this.

Star off for stupidity at the end.

5 stars. Which is unusual for me rating a story where the cuck takes the wife back, but the way your story presented the facts, and the arranged "fight" were compelling. So, after thinking about all the facts, and what transpired before, during and after the affair of the wife, hell, had to give you a 5 stars rate and another "atta boy" for a great story. Happy New Year and wishing for many more stories from you. Comment written 1/2/2022.

I like that he forgave her. I also like that your grammar, spelling, and punctuation are good - too many otherwise good stories are ruined by automated spell & grammar-checkers. :) Good character development and story-line, too. Thank-you for a good story! :)

Well I like this version better and I haven't even read the first. LoL!

Good reconciliation , put her in her place for four long and lonely years . Then he was able to let sleeping dogs lie as long as the bitch don’t sleep around or lie !

…but he never did get that STD report and died a short while later. The End.

You're getting soft in your old age.

GOOD READ! Revenge then a time to heal. I enjoy BTB but also time to heal with love and hope. 5*

A good Saddletramp story.

Another good sequel ST.

Good story but Jackson should have been charged with Rape from his confession

I'd have taken the guy's stuff.

And I would never have taken her back.

Enough said.

So he’s pussy whipped in the end. What an idiot.

What was the point? He wasted four years while he could have been her lap dog cuck boy. She wasn't on drugs when she proposed becoming promiscuous and having him eat other men's cum out of her cunt. It was so counter to normal human behavior and decency that it was a cartoon. Fail. But thanks for the effort.

huge improvement, thanks for fixing this!

enjoyed it1!...

Saddletramp you dog-a RACC story. I didn't think you had it in you.

What happened? Did you have a visit from the three ghosts over the holidays or what? Not that I don't find your story very good, but one rarely sees reconciliation in your stories! Nevertheless, as always, you told the story very well and for me the development of what happened is much easier to accept than in the original! Was fun to read!

ST doing a RAAC story? You better be looking over your shoulder or Justice will lasso you back to the BTB world! LOL! I'm not sure I would have taken her back, although her being drugged the first three times would weigh heavy on me. I definitely would've killed Jackson for that... 5*

Gave you a 5 star endorsement. There were things I did not care for. The 'stand up and fight like a man' mentality bothers me. But it is your story.

I liked he got back with her. She had been drugged even though like you pointed out she went with him in the first place which was entirely her fault. Plus ecstasy is not like a roofie where they have no idea what is happening.

A lot of readers bitch about hooking up with the ex years after she fucked up their marriage. Well I can guarantee those guys were not married for 20+ years. To be married that long, there has to be a great deal of compatibility and that part of their marriage survives the divorce. Of course the trust did not survive, so no remarriage. She can be a great travel companion, fuck buddy, roommate, girl friend, but not a fiancé and never again a wife.

Revenge porn for middle school.

A lot of the comments hit home, but then again your stuff is always good, and you have to walk in another man's shhoes.7 stars, cause he took care of business.....almost. Betas are just Alphas that don't have to prove it. If you are willing to do whatever it takes to win, you can't lose. It's the consequences that get you. The Bear approves, as always with your stories. Welcome back.

The BEAR, and Happy New Year.

Ata Boy!!!👍👏

I don't know if it's because of the end-of-year weather, but I noticed a TS with a softened heart.

Last year ST wrote a "very light footprint" story... I even commented on it.

The sequel was, as always, well written. The plot assembled, giving a certain degree of "truth" to the plot.

I may be wrong, but I think I read something similar, I mean, with the same type of dispute between males, solving it with their hands.

Everything was fine. Until the time the check is completed. He should have completed the entire prenuptial agreement or not even make use of the agreement. She ended up being awarded, even after her actions. But for that, a life should follow... And then came graduation, came the tribute, the dinner, and finally... a shared bed again, and promises of one day at a time.

No way should he have allowed himself to reconnect with his ex-wife.

Being cordial because I had children and grandchildren would be normal. Back to the relationship... Never!!!

RAAC staff will be able to enjoy themselves. The BTB gang will hate it... I was especially upset because it was her choice and how she let herself be influenced and freed the bitch inside. And because of that, there must be no turning back.

The usual 3 stars, for the effort and work.

The original story made me angry at the betrayed husband's lack of attitude.

This “continuation” made me indignant, due to the shamelessness of the betrayed ex-husband, who allowed himself to be caught again.

But that's just my opinion.

Nah wife was too fucking stupid by the first page that it wasn't worth trying to see if we got a good ST story. Gonna go with we didn't get a good one, they are getting further between these days.

But if it got better or not it still had to be better than ConPulsion's cock licking desires that he has for himself.

Nice happy ending

Like it...but then...I seem to like everything you write, that I've read so far!

Thank you for all your great stories posted here, ST56...I hope you never stop posting stories here...

Like ST I felt the original story ending was poor. However, the MC did seem an ordinary Joe. With this version he is a trained fighter. I like the story but just imagine if he were a once a week boxercise guy but who did the same thing and won. Would have made the victory so much sweeter. But it needed a better ending and this sequel provides that. Well done.

Wisdom wins in the end. Good story. 5*

I can see this lead to RAAC. marriage no, but living together yes. She was drugged 3 times. lied to her husband, and most likely fucked in their bed willingly without being drugged. 20 plus years is a lot to give up

Noice… very noice! A good ending for how she was pried upon. Yes, she still made some very bad choices after the first 3x incidents. But a predator did still take advantage of her. She needed to grow up as they say (even at 45+ years). Thank-you ST

Thanks for the effort. Had you stopped at kicking her out, would have gotten 3 stars. Pushing forward reduced it to a two star story in my view:

- He was already screwing his wife that he didn't really want. So why would he agree to a fight to own her? Which is something hubby can't give anyway.

- This follow up story is 3 times a long as the original. Pretty good sign it went off the rails in execution.

I liked it, the BTB types will hate it, but I think this had a great ending. She did something horrible but by being divorced , she turned herself around and realized how stupid she had been. She built her new life, and in doing so I think showed she was a changed person. I think Justice O Peace and the rest of ST's corps of avengers would agree this was a good ending.

This isn't one of your best efforts, ST, nor is it your usual style. The story has a good concept, but something went awry.

Why did you go to the trouble of building those back stories for your characters, when you ended up having them acting in ways that are at odds with the personas you constructed for them?

Jackson's back story portrayed him as a rascal in pretty much every way, yet you had him acting almost honorably at the end. Julie displayed characteristics of split personalities, and Tom? Well, Tom's ending decision was the most incongruous of all.

It seems like, halfway through the writing of the story, you may have changed your mind about how you were going to end it. So, it's almost like the first half of one story was combined with the last half of another story, and the two halves don't really fit together very well.

Scored this one as Average. You have done much better.

Very well done but left one piece undone. Your story should have erased the part where he shook the asshole's hand after he screwed his wife. That is a burned image of a cuck.

Sometimes people need a second chance. Another great ending

While not as BTB as some of your work, this is not an extreme RAAC either.

People change and reinvent themselves sometimes after betrayal. Great plot . The 4 yr gap is believable. The optimistic ending is refreshing.

"So you see, I never took any time away from you at all." - Until now.

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"George says guys like you..." - Why do they always listen to the guys who only want to get in their pants? And why would George know her husband better than she does?

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"You don't deserve to have something that good all to yourself." - He doesn't even know him, what does he know about what he "deserves?"

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I realize that these "Alphas" have egos the size of Jupiter, but how can he call him a cuck without even knowing him?

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"You need to reclaim your manhood" - What's this "reclaim your manhood" shit? You see it a lot in cuck stories where the cuck is supposed to need to fuck his cheating wife after the "bull" to reclaim his manhood. My manhood isn't tied into who fucks my wife.

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"Do you honestly expect to just hand Julie over to him if he wins the fight?" - It doesn't matter what he intends, he can't hand her over, he can only not stand in her way.

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As he says, it's not the cheating, it's what she expected him to do, to be a willing cuck.

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I don't see Jackson honoring the bet, it wasn't enforceable. If he DID honor it, I can't see Tom not taking it, and expecting Jackson to confess to the SBI.

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Of course he'll stay in touch with the ex-in-laws, they're his kids grandparents after all!

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It wasn't a RAAC. In some ways it wasn't even a reconciliation, since they were divorced four years before getting back together.

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Sorry, lost a star for me with them getting back together. He should have a new Honey who he introduces at the award ceremony.

1 star for giving the slut $220,000; should have been $22,000; and for taking her back.

Never take back a cheating spouse

But what did she really learn. Jackson should have had a happy little accident in prison

Even the tramp is mellowing out nowadays.

Good story ST.

As always, a great story. Well done, keep writing.

Why on earth would a guy wager everything he owns for a woman he knows will be divorced soon? Makes no sense.

Nice job

oh my god ! saddle are you ok ?

did you get hit on the head with a 2X4 by a wimpy cuck or is the cuck blackmailing you ?

i could always count on you to get my juices running with your BTB attitude and now i am

disappointed with this ending

i can only pray for you to get better and return to that wonderful saddlezone that most of your die hard fans like me love so much

i wish you a happy new year with good health and fortune and keep them stories comming

This was not good, and that is being kind...

4, a good effort to fix an honestly completely terrible story but I personally felt while this effort to improve it mostly worked there was a few problems. The MC betting everything on a match even if he was confident was odd, the ex-lawyer guy so meekly accepting his fate after seemingly being a career criminal I'm not sure worked, and while I didn't mind the reconciliation I wish there was more to it. Seemed like they were separated two years, banged, and suddenly everything was right. Still despite my complaints an overall good story, made all the more better seeing with what the author had to work with from the original story.

Dogshit. Another weak, needy, feminized, faggotty husband character.

*1!!!!!!!!!!!! A RAAC is still a RAAC!!!!!!! AND I REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY HATE RAAC's!!!!!!!!! Of course, the RAAC was telegraphed - he went to the graduation, he followed her life after the divorce, he went to the "Teacher of the Year" award celebration. If someone hurt him a much as he claimed he was, he would not have done those things!!! Hate or 'I don't give a shit!' would have replaced the love, not follow her like a puppy waiting for any of her scraps. ST1956 you've done much better than this effort. Yeah, I know, you were working with another's ideas but this time you failed to provide the level of story that you well known for writing!!!

I could identify with each emotion and action you created for Tom except for taking her back after the divorce. Julie may have been drugged the first time but going out on a second date to be drugged and screwed a second time shows how little concern for her marriage she really felt. Then she decided to get what her seducer wanted with no thought about her marriage vows and screwed her lover in her own bed knowing that her husband would be home. Tossing aside her marriage for the freedom to screw Jackson and any other men was the ultimate disrespect to Tom, her vows, and her family. No way in hell he could forget those actions and take her back. He could never trust her to keep any promise she might make. I can hear her explanation the next time: He made me promise and probably knew I'd be do it again so I did what he expected.

Great story as I love happy endings and reconciliation.

Good read, just too rich for me.

This RAAC worked for me and usually I detest them.

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But for a few issues; Tom, in affect, got Jackson's confession on video - true Jackson did not know he was being recorded but the admission of using drugs on her and his goal to target, steal, harm wives sure would be of SBI interest. And in the right State even a one-sided recording is allowed to be used if discloses uncoerced criminal actions and continued illegal actions. And nothing illegal for Tom to put this video on the web for the whole State to see as branding Jackson a womanizing predator.

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I was amazed Tom's own father was not at the ring. Also how little their two adult kids got involved.

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5*, Hooyah, a few Salutes

This was not the best by ST1956. Many are commenting on the characters, but my issue is with one plot point. That is where the husband tells the lawyer that he doesn’t want his material wealth, but he will accept turning himself in to the authorities instead. That doesn’t seem reasonable. Not because he’s forgiving or doesn’t desire more wealth. It’s that there’s no way to ensure that he will comply. The lawyer is a known douchebag and has gone to great lengths to perform douchebaggery on many people. What prevents him from reneging on this deal? He’s going to get beat up again? Not likely. BTB or RAAC, I don’t care. This point deflated the story’s tension.

Have all the writers here had their balls removed? You need to write about cheating wives and cocksucker boyfriends? Fine. How about having some sense of what you have written and write a man consistent with your parameters who keeps her out after throwing her out?

Wow!! Even Saddletramp is going soft!! WTF??

Another fun read ST!

A great sequel and love the ending BUT why do so many women believe in fairy tales ????(jaybee186)