by DG Hear
very nice story as usual.
I still find very archaic and very outdated, your habit of asking parents for marriage approval, as well as the will not to live together before marriage.
These days, all of this is really very rare and often comes from a very religious family where premarital sex is often prohibited as well.
Good story as usual, a great way to start the day. 5 stars
somewhere east of Omaha
Mark dodged a bullet. It’s hard to beat a guy who was a girls first fuck
I recently started back writing stories. If something keeps coming into my mind, I try writing about it. After a story is edited I still make changes. (and errors) haha. Thank you all for taking the time to read my stories. I started back reading them myself.
With Respect
DG Hear
I must say I didn't like the story - it is my least favorite from this author. Well, not so much the story, as the cindy person. That she's willing and able to have sex with this guy while being involved with another means she's a high risk to cheat. She's not awful as a person, but she's not exactly a dream catch she's made out to be by protagonist.
It's been a while, DG. You were one of my favorite authors when I first started reading Lit stories. This was a sweet remembrance. Thank you for sharing it.
First, it's great to read another story from you.
I do have a few quibbles, first, DNA testing didn't take off until about 1980, I'd guess about a decade after your story.
Second, sex is a bad way to determine comparability. In the past 50+ years, I've seen it work occasionally but usually fail.
Thanks again for an otherwise fine story.
I'm glad you started writing again. You seem to still have the knack for writing enjoyable stories.
5
Name change
I really liked the story--enough to give it five stars. However, the Able family changed their name to Abel, then changed it back again.
Good to see you're back to writing.
Good story, I do like just about everything you have posted and am glad you are writing again. This one didn't flow as well as usual but maybe just the format with the narration. Thanks for a good read.
A different way to tell a story - enjoyable as is all you work. Keep writing, I’ll keep reading.
Solid written story - good storyline, good characters and well written dialogue. I gave it 5 stars! I was entertained and felt time reading was worth it.
What a great love story, well written and with a storyline that made the story a pleasure to read. As a fan of DG's writings I too am glad to see new stories appear on Literotica. Well Done 5/5