Remembering the Bicycle

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This was the arrangement I had envisioned when I discovered, perhaps wrongly, that my wife was cheating: Janet with Benjamin, Andrea with me. I could not exult in the fulfillment of my wish.

My daughter had been cruelly wheeled out of my life on a bicycle. Decades later, Janet rode herself and Andrea into it. My wife, my beautiful, fragile Millie was carved from my world with a knife that hacked at her soul while stabbing my heart. My wife, my beautiful, sensitive Andrea has helped put my heart back together.

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AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I liked it, but the other guy needed some attitude adjustment.

It's one thing to conduct an affair with the wife of a friend. If he then took advantage of her condition... or if that condition was the very cause of his ability to seduce her, then he's filth.

On reflection of Millie's narrative, though, I think it's safe to say that when she started her affair, she knew what she was doing.

She was still living at home, still interacting with her husband, and was cognisant enough to choose to take two 3-month 'vacations', plan them, and manage to get to where she was going in one piece.

That said, it's all academic once the dementia set in.

Maybe the stress of conducting a betrayal helped to exacerbate her condition as well anyway.

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbiman8 months ago

interesting, many parts quite unbelievable and mostly sort of weird.

AnonymousAnonymous10 months ago

A well-told tale. Thank you.

Ed

AllNigherAllNigherabout 1 year ago

I enjoyed the story mostly.... But....

The main character is a bit of an ass. He wants to hook the girl up with his son and he can't simply not fuck her even when the mom wants him and he wants her?

Then the black girl thrown in just to clarify that black people are obnoxious, I guess? Meanwhile the other characters are saying and doing stuff much worse.

From the beginning it was clear the wife wasn't all there. That he didn't notice that she couldn't remember things like I'm going out of town alone is nuts. Sorry, but she was made far too dizzy to think it would not be noticed as a problem. And... If she didn't think she was cheating why did she fuck the guy it of town but not him?

Nice idea but could use an overhaul to make more sense... And maybe bring some emotion. Like the MC, I can't along for the entire ride but in the end just didn't have any passion for how things turned out. Fun ride but if expect some feeling of sadness considering the premise of the story

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