All Comments on 'Remembrance of Things Past'

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nadaliwnadaliwalmost 11 years ago
*****

You are an amazing story teller.

Pete666Pete666almost 11 years ago
Great story

Can't wait for the next installment

suebramleysuebramleyalmost 11 years ago
Wonderful

Thank you for yet another wonderful story you just get better and better. I have loved the series of the Baxter pack so far - long may it continue.

iloveawereiloveawerealmost 11 years ago
literotica hall of fame

i loved it. i am in aww how the lives of the baxters get better and better. my faves are drago and Kelly. all your men r dreamy but drago was that extra a little bad alot good and sexy. keep up the good writing it is so awesome to see a writer dedicated to their stories.

MyrtleBeachFanaticMyrtleBeachFanaticalmost 11 years ago
Loved your story but...

Am I the only one weirded out by the detail told to the cubs? Couldn't he have just said they mated instead of describing in detail their mating? I know this is Lit and we want details, but it just weirded me out. Or did I miss something and maybe he just told the details to their parents?

HonourHonouralmost 11 years ago
Good lass

That was a grand tale lassie but if I ever catch you pittin lakes in ma bonnie land ah'll pit ye ower ma knees and skelp yer bahookie till yer lugs ring its LOCHS we hae here.

fefe428fefe428almost 11 years ago
Wonderful as usual!!!!

It was an absolutely amazing story, and I loved how you've started introducing us to the children, so we get glimpses of how they are and what their personalities are. It's very sweet.

As for the concern about the detail of the story being told to the cubs....I think it's safe to assume that the detail is for us the readers and it's not being conveyed to the children. I think the idea is to transport the reader back in time to when those things occurred not necessarily for the reader to assume that we're listening to the story that Cole is telling the children verbatim.

dpc2964dpc2964almost 11 years ago
I love it

I am enjoying this very much. I think we are getting the story details and the cubs are just being told that they mated. I can hardly wait for the next part

DoctimeDoctimealmost 11 years ago
*plus*plus*plus*plus*plus MORE

What an honor to be a healer for the Baxter clan! I will have to watch my P's and Q's. You have set a new higher bar for other authors of family saga's. As we have fallen in love with the Baxter clan through your prior stories, it is wonderful to get a prequel and an insight into their past. More, more, more! Ken

ChurosChurosalmost 11 years ago
@myrtlebeachfanatic

I don't think Cole narrated the details of his parent's mating to the cubs. I doubt if he is even privy to that moment. That is why instead of having Cole do all the talking, the author put those scenes as flashbacks. Do you see the effect?

@lilgirlsix

It is nice to read a new story from you. I could see that your writing style has improved.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
very good story

Please keep writing.

Archangel_MArchangel_Malmost 11 years ago

No matter how much LG6 and I talk and work together, she still astounds me with her awesome ideas. :)

This will be an ongoing series giving background stories as we come up with them. In due course we will hear from some characters of mine as well, who you will meet at the end of the new story we're co-authoring.

I could give you all some hints about where future installments of this story will take us... but where's the fun in that? ;)

Rad'lRad'lalmost 11 years ago
Well done, thanks

Enjoyed reading the story; it has got to be difficult to gin up a backstory at this stage of the game. You did it well!!

MizTMizTalmost 11 years ago

You did a really nice on w/the back story while at the same time reminding us that the future is surly brite. How did you let us know the future was bright? Cole gave the history lesson in the new school room which they needed because of the number of successful births. And although we didn't need this story to fill in any holes in your story you gave it to us anyway because the characters demanded it. I will keep eye out for your new stories.; m

LadySilverNovaLadySilverNovaalmost 11 years ago
Many Thanks Given

I loved this chapter...loved it. About time we learn more of the Baxter pack's history. Looking forward to the next chapter, whenever that may be.

katgoddess1katgoddess1almost 11 years ago
Oh yes!

More werewolves!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Awesome

I have read all of the Wolf's Pet chapters more than once and I was hoping for more. When I can on this site under the same tag "Werewolf" and say what you added my face lit up like a Christmas Tree. You are truly a great writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Loving this installment! I look forward to the next saga. I have been reading them in order. A great way to spend a weekend!

Pete666Pete666over 10 years ago
More please,

I love this one and look forward to reading more.

lilgirlsixlilgirlsixover 10 years agoAuthor
Ch 2

Is on its way to be edited. My plan is to post it when Fondest Dreams is finished. There are 3 more chapters to go so figure in about one month. I PROMISE!!

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