All Comments on 'Renaissance Festival Cums Alive'

by NakedinNC

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photon100photon100about 15 years ago
Great start!

Hot Hot Hot! Renn Fests' are the best and what a great place for showing off. The story line is really hot and believable but if I had to pick I would say some of the dialogue could improve and you could do without works like "love muscle". All in all though, a great start! Thanks!!! Now try attending the "Pennsic Wars" in Pennsylvania each August.... truly a visual treat!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Personally I like the Texas Renfest best

With the leather or fur clad wenches, or the chainmaille clad wenches, or the dancing girls, sexuality runs rampart. Good pics on chainmail.com for those that want to see some of the pics. Others are available elsewhere on line try google.

motleymorganmotleymorganabout 14 years ago
Please Write More!

This was a very evocative story, especially for a first offering. The setting of the Ren Fest was playful and fun, and the characters were clearly defined. I especially enjoyed how well the 'hairy pussy angle' was worked into the narrative.

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