All Comments on 'Renee's Two-Martini Mea Culpa'

Not usually a category I read - but glad I did! Great story! Good luck In Summer contest!

Great tale. Thanks for your contribution to the event :)

Hi, here from the Letters of Love event. I wasn’t familiar with the original story but I think that made the emotions and desire conveyed all the more touching. I particularly liked where she explained that since they’d never been together and since she hadn’t asked Julia, she was having to imagine what it would be like. That’s the way so many loves are that grow and build over time, the building anticipation though in this case she doesn’t know if it will ever go further. That leaves the reader hopeful for them that it will. Well written and emotionally conveyed, 5*