by Faerie_Queene_31
interesting start.. m hooked to the story.. please post the next chapter as son as u can
This was an amazing beginning to your first story. Keep writing, you're a natural! I'll definitely be coming back for more
DO MORE OF THIS STORY BECAUSE IT'S GETTING INTERESTING ESPEACIALLY AT THE CLIFFHANGER. HOPELLY GABBY WILL BE OKAY.
Good story, and I really want to know where it goes next.
This is a great start on an interesting story. I'm very interested to see where it goes. Please continue! :)
Great story. Flows well. Like the characters. Want to know what he did and these two should stay together.