All Comments on 'Renewable Energy and Orgasms Pt. 01'

Seriously hope there's a part 2 for this.

oh wow this was an amazing read! great work, thank you!

So good, hoping there’s a part 2!

this is one of the best stories i've read on here in a while! i hope to see part two around soon!

This is crazy good where is the man who will talk to me like that fr fr

holy fucking hell thanks

When is part 2 out?

I can't wait to read part two, incredible. and glad he didn't pull out

Part 2, pleaseee!

I can’t wait for part 2!!!

I don't get this way of telling a story, like this is happening to me. I just don't get it, sorry - R

@R then don't read it...? Lol

I think this is brilliant, but ... I don't like the tense it is written in. Don't know what it is were it refers to 'you' all the time. Writing in that tense doesn't work for me. It's weird. I also don't understand why there has to be a machine that takes away her orgasmic fulfilment. I thought she had a powerfull sex drive. It would be hotter if she didn't need that. I liked that she was fully dressed when she woke up but the removal of her clothes was too quick. Should have left her presumably red faced in her underware longer and made her visibly wet her knickers, or task her not to wet them or she'll be punished. Other than those things I think it's great - R