All Comments on 'Reproductive Labor'

by KallieHF

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tarthearttartheartabout 1 year ago

the only thing that could make it better is if she was led out of there on a leash. I think you could show her descent into becoming an idiot more humiliation and desiring of Ms. Safra, perhaps with another girl.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, a good start. I agree with the tartheart that she should be lead out with a collar and leash. When they get home, then a skippy maid outfit is put on. Afterwards Safra rips it off and ravishes Valentina. Val is made to sleep in a cage at the foot of the bed. After becoming pregnant Safra gives Val to some of her trans friends for use. So many options to explore. Good start.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

yall out here writing fanfic cause you aint satisfied with a oneshot lmao

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 hours ago

This is the bleeding edge of experimental fiction, a trans woman feminizing a cis butch? Sure I love butches, but you have to appreciate this as a work of art pushing the boundaries

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Hi! I'm Kallie, a writer of erotic stories - mostly mind control and hypnosis-themed erotica, but I have written other stuff in the past and may do again. The main platform for my writing is my Patreon page, and by throwing me a few dollars a month on there you can ensure I ke...