by MarcNagol
Liked the buildup, realistic, in a fantasy world sense, dialog, and the well used but always enjoyable incestuous tension between a young woman and her uncle. Hope you don't stop here :-).
Just waiting to be approved!
I'm not sure where the story goes after Three. Once you read the next two chapters I will be asking for ideas where the readers want the story to go.
Chapter Two has already been submitted. Chapter Three is almost done and should be submitted tomorrow.