All Comments on 'Rescue Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
fantastic Story

Hard to explain my thought`s, wow what a great story read all 3 parts and was so engrossed in it, is there more to this ?, l do hope so.

PyroPyroover 18 years agoAuthor
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This is the ongoing story of Ray and Chou and how they find love and compatibility for their kinky sides. I have two more stories plotted out and I'm considering a third - so yes, indeed, there will be more.

I want to apologize for the missed "close italic" tag on page two. It didn't show up in the preview and my formatted copy that I used to paste into Lit shows it as closed. Somehow a bracket must have been erased. I hope it doesn't detract from your enjoyment of the tale.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Loved it

I have read all three chapters of this story and I would love to read more. Is there any chance of it being continued?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
glad i found you pyro

wow all the devine details.i fantasize about a lover like ray,so this was like you were in my head.would like to experience bondage,maybe one day i'll find my ray,then i'll send him your story.i too vow to be open,honest and upfront about my kinks.so please write on.gem

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Amazing First

I'm so happy that I chose this to be my first literotica short-story here. I finished all 3 parts, and it was just incredible

jsmangisjsmangisalmost 7 years ago
Great Story, Cant Wait For Chapter 4

I really enjoyed this chapter. Normally I don't care for BDSM, but you have a great touch and you have made a convert out of me. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

Great story why didn't you finish it you get a 1 for not finishing it and posting other stories

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago

Dam great story please come back and finish it

JohnnyRebBBJohnnyRebBBalmost 2 years ago

I really detest getting to like a story then have the author to lazy to finish it

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Originally from the Midwest and has lived on both coasts for many years, but keeps coming back to his home state. An occasional author of quirky poems, rants about gold-digging lost loves or soul-mates and the occasional short story, he is also working on three novels and ca...

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