by Kurik
Superb scenario and not the usual blowjob, pussy, then ass shagging that you get in most of the other stories of this type. Very refreshing.
first time i ever submitted a comment, been readin this sight for a year..more maybe-
sooo hot! write more! please!!!!!!!!!!
-from a girl
Good plot - good suspense - well written. Keep at it if you enjoy it.
Two stories unfolding at once and the helplessness of the situation was so intense. Please write more!
Begins to reveal the levels of stimulation and intensity you excel at. Know your best is yet to...um...come. Can't wait to watch future developments.
I came 2 times just from reading your story. I so loved reading this and I feel like the woman in your story I know that it is not a good thing to get turned on by stories like this but damn what a story.
This is one of the best I've read on this site. It's very evocative and surprisingly complex for erotica. Very good job.
Having a kink for beautiful women in suits, blouses and skirts, I am overjoyed to at last find a entire sexy story with the girl never getting nude. BRAVO!
Rape is NEVER hot and to rape a woman with child? You have a very sick mind. There is a difference between erotic non/con and violent rape. I hope you never write another word. Just disgusting.