by The_Wolff
THIS HAD TO BE THE STUPIDEST DAMN STORY I HAVE EVER READ!!! THIS DON'T MAKE NO DAMN SENSE!!!! I READ THE FIRST COUPLA PARAGRAPHS AND JUST COULDN'T READ ANY MORE OF THIS BULLSHIT!! 1/5 NOT EVEN THAT!!
I found this tale to be very entertaining. You just have to realize that it is a spoof/parody of the typical fantasy setting - that becomes obvious quite quickly. Therefore, it might have been better to post this in the "humor & satire" category, but that doesn't make it bad :-)
With the addition of a lot of "The" s and "A"s this story, while a fun read already, would be much better.