by emelle78
I wouldn't mind a follow up to this. But either way, please continue to write. I love the teasing you put into your writing. The woman's perspective and the seduction of her lover is such a hot part of your writing!
Main problems were 2 spelling mistakes (wrong kind of "taught", noticeable in this type of story):& infinite punctuation that I'm admittedly unsure about.
However, with the agreed-upon relationship, would like to read more between them, perhaps in other places/settings.