All Comments on 'Research Assistant to Office Wife'

by emelle78

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geek37geek37about 1 year ago

She should become his actual wife. 5 star write, 5 star read.

lc69hunterlc69hunterabout 1 year ago

super erotic. The ring thing was so hot

oneofthegirlsoneofthegirlsabout 1 year ago

I wouldn't mind a follow up to this. But either way, please continue to write. I love the teasing you put into your writing. The woman's perspective and the seduction of her lover is such a hot part of your writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

His office wife needs to show him the baby bump he gave her.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Main problems were 2 spelling mistakes (wrong kind of "taught", noticeable in this type of story):& infinite punctuation that I'm admittedly unsure about.

However, with the agreed-upon relationship, would like to read more between them, perhaps in other places/settings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

You can seriously write a blowjob scene, damn :)

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