All Comments on 'Resident Evil 4 Ch. 03'

Your work is getting better but I think the shit was a little over the top..... Keep the stories coming I'm curious to see where you go from here.

Would have been better if the story didn't have so many fractured sentences and grammatical mistakes. . .

Never write a story again. You killed grammar with this story. If this was printed out I wouldn't even use it to wipe my ass its that big a pile of shit.

OMG, that was funny, grammar needs a little help but umm yeah it was also sorta gross LOL

from a person who played the game yea it was tight u got ada's personality down to a T i liked it but the sperm thing is gross but diffrent i always thought zombies couldnt have sex until i started reading this all u need to do is work on grammar and grow

when is ashely going to have sex with leon i always thought they were goin to get together becuz of all the stuff they been through

THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING DONT WRITE ANYMORE STORIES CAUSE THAT WAS SHIT