All Comments on 'Resident Evil 4 Ch. 03'

by WilliamMandrake

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
wtf?

THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING DONT WRITE ANYMORE STORIES CAUSE THAT WAS SHIT

rere16rere16over 13 years ago
in time

when is ashely going to have sex with leon i always thought they were goin to get together becuz of all the stuff they been through

rere16rere16over 13 years ago
whoa

from a person who played the game yea it was tight u got ada's personality down to a T i liked it but the sperm thing is gross but diffrent i always thought zombies couldnt have sex until i started reading this all u need to do is work on grammar and grow

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wow

OMG, that was funny, grammar needs a little help but umm yeah it was also sorta gross LOL

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Piece of shit

Never write a story again. You killed grammar with this story. If this was printed out I wouldn't even use it to wipe my ass its that big a pile of shit.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
grammer check it

Would have been better if the story didn't have so many fractured sentences and grammatical mistakes. . .

MedicineManMedicineManabout 18 years ago
Getting better but......

Your work is getting better but I think the shit was a little over the top..... Keep the stories coming I'm curious to see where you go from here.

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