by WilliamMandrake
THAT WAS FUCKING DISGUSTING DONT WRITE ANYMORE STORIES CAUSE THAT WAS SHIT
when is ashely going to have sex with leon i always thought they were goin to get together becuz of all the stuff they been through
from a person who played the game yea it was tight u got ada's personality down to a T i liked it but the sperm thing is gross but diffrent i always thought zombies couldnt have sex until i started reading this all u need to do is work on grammar and grow
OMG, that was funny, grammar needs a little help but umm yeah it was also sorta gross LOL
Never write a story again. You killed grammar with this story. If this was printed out I wouldn't even use it to wipe my ass its that big a pile of shit.
Would have been better if the story didn't have so many fractured sentences and grammatical mistakes. . .
Your work is getting better but I think the shit was a little over the top..... Keep the stories coming I'm curious to see where you go from here.