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by MellowJoe

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abiostudent3abiostudent3over 2 years ago

I'll be honest, I'm a little confused as to the point of the story... But hey. You do you.

You'll probably find more success if you publish in "non erotic," rather than science fiction and fantasy, though.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

HUNH? WTF IS this? You ain't gettin ' no high scores from me!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

WTF? I don't understand it...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Loved it, absolutely loved it.

jocko_smithjocko_smithabout 2 years ago

Not that the words were badly written -- they weren't. But there was no real conflict to resolve, no moral to teach, and no character development. These are the things I look for in a story, many readers do.

Several times it seemed it might go somewhere, but it just fizzled out. I don't mean to be insulting, but I was left with "... AND ???"

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