All Comments on 'Restless'

Thanks, Dar_Jisbo! "Restless" is a fine story, quick and sweet. And you write very well -- often, Lit stories send me tripping over typos, homophones, and run-on sentences, but good writing lets me read faster!

An interesting change to the vampiress style story. I thoroughly enjoyed it! Can’t wait to see what’s next for this story and characters!

I thought he was going to end up with the vampires as her lover for eternity.

My mom is an editress. When I was growing up, she trained me how to write well.

I would definitely like to see a follow-up chapter to this