All Comments on 'Restrained for a Caning'

Love the subject material and punishment aspects, however you need an editor! Watch when copy/pasting to the site as you placed entire sections of the story line on here more than one. Look forward to reading more of the storyline. :-)

You cut and paste an entire section, thus repeating it verbatim. Please do yourself a favor and proofread carefully. then, have a different person read it, correct any mistakes, and THEN publich it.

I am not sure what happened in the end cause I quit reading it when the story started to repeat itself. So I lost interest and came straight here to comment without reading the rest of the story!

Your story line was really, good. I was lost at the repeated lines of "He leads me towards the spanking horse. Taking my hand, he pulls me over it. My skirt rises, revealing my maroon gym knickers. Each leg of the horse is fitted with a leather cuff. Sir binds me tightly by the wrists and ankles."

it was repeated 2X. Proof read your story, if you don't have some one to edit your work, try to make sure there are no repeats. When your talking about a situation where the girl is a submissive and her husband is her Dominant, please keep in mind there are Dominants who read this too. When you use the title (sir) instead of sir being, sir put a capital over it when talking about her Dominant. like this. (Sir please no, don't punish me servery) makes sense. Other Dominants put a title over the other Dominants title as they are a equal to each other, a submissive will capitalize the title as they are Owned.

You had a great start to the story, keep up the good work. :)

I liked the story but had a problem reading it, since in two places parts of it are repeated meaning that I had a break in concentration as I worked out what was happening. One of these is a repeat of the beginning, another (less disruptive because it was more obvious what had happened) was at the end.

A good story is ruined by the author not proofreading it at all. Several parts repeat leaving the story a muddled mess.

But I would have applied my personal rod whilst Susie was restrained.

Needs editing badly. Breaks with repeating sections several times. It would be a wonderful story otherwise.

Hi everyone, apologies for the errors in this submission! I’ve been told and probably should be punished! I will edit and resubmit very soon.

Regardless of the glitch that must have really annoyed you by now - don’t worry everyone makes mistakes - the actual content itself seems overwhelmingly too much. Was it supposed to be 14 strikes (12 + the extra 2) from each of the 3 types of cane OR 14 strikes in total, even then towards the end it suggests she received 15 strikes? So was it 14,15, 32 or 33 blows?

“... Dazed, I endure his wrath...”

Seriously what kind of Dom punishes a sub when they are angry AND without a warm up followed by no aftercare ??

To me it didn’t come across as a punishment, it seemed more like a severe beating. To the extent that she lost bladder control?

Tess (UK)

You're right, you need to be punished for such poor grammar, repeating, horrible math and wasting many peoples time who were hoping for an erotic story, not such garbage.

Straight to jail.